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RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

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RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 20:16

Ok so here is my one of my first beats,im still learnin on fruity loops so check it out and tell me what you think and what should i change and stuffs ! Thx! =) :flower:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/557257662fb67292/
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Tash8 » Feb 16th, '09, 20:30

it's not bad, drums are a bit weird, bad sounds imo.. overall the sounds you picked are bad, the actually drum pattern was decent, same with the melody pattern... great start for a beginner, keep it up.
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 20:32

Tash8 wrote:it's not bad, drums are a bit weird, bad sounds imo.. overall the sounds you picked are bad, the actually drum pattern was decent, same with the melody pattern... great start for a beginner, keep it up.
im too noob to understand what u said :p but i can say that i do like the melody i did :unsure:

tash u use fruity loops? i can send u the file and u try edit it and make it more descent?? hmmm
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Tash8 » Feb 16th, '09, 20:39

le tunisien wrote:
Tash8 wrote:it's not bad, drums are a bit weird, bad sounds imo.. overall the sounds you picked are bad, the actually drum pattern was decent, same with the melody pattern... great start for a beginner, keep it up.
im too noob to understand what u said :p but i can say that i do like the melody i did :unsure:

tash u use fruity loops? i can send u the file and u try edit it and make it more descent?? hmmm


i do have fl studio, but i'm kinda busy atm mixing a few tracks for people... but you can go ahead and zip it up and send it and when i have time i'll look into it.
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Xray » Feb 16th, '09, 20:45

First beat and already making "I'm The Illest" accusations. :o
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 16th, '09, 20:48

yeah drums,clap and everything need some mixing here and there....to make them sound more smooth-er(?)...ya know what i mean...
also im feelin the hook melody :y:
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 20:54

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:yeah drums,clap and everything need some mixing here and there....to make them sound more smooth-er(?)...ya know what i mean...
also im feelin the hook melody :y:

yeah thats what im sayin, i feel that the melodie was so kewl, i need a pro touch of Tash for the drums and other stuffs to make it a pro beat!!!

Ok here is my Fp Files ,tash check em out and Try to master this shet and make it sound pro as u are, :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
http://www.zshare.net/download/55727352d9bef5ce/ (it contains fp files of 2 other beats)
cant wait to hear how it will sound
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Robbie G » Feb 18th, '09, 23:56

I thought it was pretty good for your first try. :y:
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Requiem » Feb 19th, '09, 01:21

listening now.....

pretty wierd, but i can definitely see a hell of a lot of potential. the melody's kinda cool, and i love the snares. drums are fair, sound a little too repetitive. and i like that secondary think u added. claps are decent too.

^really not that bad for ur first beat :happy: and i can helps u out some on fl studio. tash set me up, taught me everything i know, lol.
pm me a .zip sometime, i'll see what i can do :smoking:
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Re: RedZek- Im the Illest ( my 1st beat here)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 19th, '09, 13:17

Ice Killa wrote:listening now.....

pretty wierd, but i can definitely see a hell of a lot of potential. the melody's kinda cool, and i love the snares. drums are fair, sound a little too repetitive. and i like that secondary think u added. claps are decent too.

^really not that bad for ur first beat :happy: and i can helps u out some on fl studio. tash set me up, taught me everything i know, lol.
pm me a .zip sometime, i'll see what i can do :smoking:
that would be So amazin if u can make sound better,Add some stuffs and make it sound not repetitive and change claps if u want and make it more descent and mastered xD lets see what you can do Heres the Zip...Btw when u finish upload the mp3 version of it pls if u usin fl 8 cuz im usin fl 7 kk thx!
>> http://www.zshare.net/download/55727352d9bef5ce/
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