http://www.zshare.net/audio/5586203504e12ad2/
, idk but i like this one better and always like the melodie i do cuz I finish the melodie only when i say this is it, this is what its supposed to sound like
Aight Check out homies and tell me what u think, is there improvement and what i shall change or add and what was bad and stuffs !! thx for Comments 
