the intro is not good imo...like its very expanding and its boring..the piano could be leaved out.. at least in the intro...
the drums are kool..the synth thing i dont know hów to call it sounds choppy and un-done..i would mix it a lil smoother..get me?
umm overall pretty okay...yeah okay is another word for it sucks....i mean you starting out so all kool...try to insert some switch ups...cuz i cant imagine listening to this in a club
keep working...(hope this helped in someway)