by Tornado » Jun 12th, '09, 13:20
I dunno, the beat sounds like two different beats used. I loe the string section, but it feels empty, like you needed a lower string cause it sounded like there was no low-end frequencies, this part should've been the chorus but it was hard to tell as the beat kept changing every 4 bars unless you wanted it to keep changing.
The piano section, melody was again good, but again, the section sounded a bit empty. I dunno maybe a higher bassline for both parts may sort it out as you haven't added it yet. Piano could be the verses, judging from the listen of it.
Overall, not bad, but it sounds incomplete. I would go for a more dramtic feel to bring it to life
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