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[Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

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[Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Jul 23rd, '11, 08:33

Did this a while ago :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 23rd, '11, 12:07

thanks for following the new rule bro :y:

and also good looks on using sound cloud... great way to start off :worship: :worship:

this remake is fabulous.. I think what you can do to perfect it is actually adjust the volumes, and mix the instruments... the Kick could use some eq and the snares maybe a very soft reverb... the pad on the back is too low in volume so bring it up a bit. The piano almost at the end is really good... but some notes are on the wrong scale so they sound a bit out of tune.

keep at it bro, hope this helped :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

Postby mdemaz » Jul 23rd, '11, 12:46

Wow, that was actually surprisingly well done.
I love pad tone you used dude.
You got obvious skills at production.

Good luck with your future creations.

The track feels really bare though...You should of added more sounds to the mix man..Other then that, nice piano solo at the end.
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Jul 23rd, '11, 20:52

iight Thanks to both of you. I'm gonna go take your advice and try to fix it up if i could find the flp file. I'll def apply it to my other stuff. Thanks :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Jul 23rd, '11, 23:24

Thanks :y: any suggestions on what song i should try to remake?
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 24th, '11, 04:48

Pretty good man. :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Not Afraid Remake- (Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Jul 24th, '11, 05:46

thanks :y:
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