New Beat [June 30th]

[Ethos]

Well I haven't dropped any new beats lately. And I've taken notice in all those peeps that are dropping some new productions. (Sorry I haven't gave any feed. Been a little busy. Will as soon ASAP) So I thought I'd drop a new one that i've been working on. Production for me has been a little slow so I kinda got rusty. So it's more like a rought draft. Tell me what you think. and I put a tag on it. I dont really know why though. nobody is gonna steal a non complete beat. but still. you never know. lol. and for some reason there is a long period of silence at the end. i dont know why. Anyways... feed please.

New Beat
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2495724a7042c4/

[Tash8]

I listened to it and forgot to feed haha

anyways it's nice flow to it, not my fav from you

but nice

[mart85]

it has potential I think the drums should be much louder tho... and I wasn't feeling the kick that much and I think there was a melody that didn't fit too well with the rest during what would be the hook I guess... I'm not sure tho, it's just that it doesn't sound 100% right to me... I think it's because the 2 melodies you added for the chorus (maybe there are more, but there 2 different distinct melodies that I noticed) I think those 2 don't go well together... it's hard to judge for me tho, so try to look into that maybe

but the beat has potential, for sure keep it up it should be great

[Ethos]

it has potential I think the drums should be much louder tho... and I wasn't feeling the kick that much and I think there was a melody that didn't fit too well with the rest during what would be the hook I guess... I'm not sure tho, it's just that it doesn't sound 100% right to me... I think it's because the 2 melodies you added for the chorus (maybe there are more, but there 2 different distinct melodies that I noticed) I think those 2 don't go well together... it's hard to judge for me tho, so try to look into that maybe

but the beat has potential, for sure keep it up it should be great

I think your talking about that laser thing.
Um..... I'll see what I can do. Like i said i've been a little out of tune so to speak. So im kinda rusty. lol.

And tash thanx for the feed.