Time After Time

[Tash8]

Hello,

I think this is my best beat I have done yet

http://myspace.com/8tash8
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=720184

Title: Time After Time

Thanks,
Tash8

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

hmm...its not ur best...IMO
and i dont really feelin it...so
keep it up

[Ethos]

Admittingly its not your best. and for some reason it jumps from the chorus to the verse part. like you can hear the jump not flow properly. but... I gotta say this is better than some of those ones that you made at first with the screwed up melodies. lol. keep it up

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

Its not bad man but its not your best. It sounds very laid-back, and I like the overall sound of it, but the jump from verse to chorus and back into verse is just a little odd. Nice work though, keep it up.

8/10

[mart85]

yeah it's not bad... like the others said, the transition are kinda "rough"... and I think the melodies/instruments are a bit too loud, if you put turned down the volume a little it would be better IMO and it would sound less repetitive (not that it sounds too repetitive, but it would help )... but it's not bad, you did a good job on this beat, you're getting better for sure

[Tash8]

thanks for the help everyone, i would mess around with it some more, but it takes like 30 min to render it and this is probably not gonna be used for audio so i'll just leave it as is haha

thanks for tips