Beat 12 - New

[Tash8]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/25307777ec8468/

It's only 1:10, because that's basically one verse

feed please

[mart85]

it's not bad drums were good... the melody was alright, it had good moments, but I thought it could be tighter, like some notes weren't necessary... but good job on this, nice work... keep it up

[Tash8]

^ thanks for the feed, i couldn't add a back up melody for it..and It got repetitive so i didn't know what to do..

[Rapsoldier101]

i really liked the piano but like mart said it did kind of seem like a few notes didnt really need to be their

[IceAxe]

the drum pattern was good. the piano was ok... but yeah like mart said, some notes weren't needed.

keep it up