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Beat 14 - Feed Please - UPDATED

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Beat 14 - Feed Please - UPDATED

Postby Tash8 » Jul 5th, '07, 23:20

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2582922e33e98e/

I think this is my best beat actually, again it's only a one verse thing :)
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Re: Beat 14 - Feed Please

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 6th, '07, 01:33

dr. dre style lol

sounds to random, the pattern switching is like here and there witch was wierd (from a rapping point of view)

but, the drums are nice n simple they work, the syhtn goin with the drums was nice, the electric guitar part was the best part of it all imo and i think you should have exploited it more, the other melodie was good also

i think at the electric guitar parts you should emphazise the guitar more and not so much the drums.

at the other melodie you should make it less notice-able

the hissing was strange, did you add that ? coz if it was supposed to be a vynil type effect, find another one lol :p

idk if its your best, all the parts are some of your best, but together as a beat it probably isnt..if that makes sense lol
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Re: Beat 14 - Feed Please

Postby Tash8 » Jul 6th, '07, 01:49

no i didn't add a vinyl hmm

yea idk if i said it, but after i render stuff the beat it self sounds different and it takes me forever to rerender so i just dont fix it... but yea i get you.. they were all too sudden of changes..
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Re: Beat 14 - Feed Please

Postby mart85 » Jul 6th, '07, 02:03

I think the "vinyl" sound bar is referring to is the hi-hat... it kinda sounds like a hiss, but it's not that bad either I think :sweating: you could probably get a better one tho

the "synths"/main melody was good, it fitted well with the drums... I wasn't sure about the electric guitar part, cause it was kinda low, like Bar said, maybe turning it up a bit would make it shine more... overall it's a good beat... keep it up :y:

and by the way, I saw you mentionned a few times that it takes forever to render a beat... why is that? my computer is quite slow and it takes like 30-60 seconds to render a "one-verse" beat... in the "sampler interpolation" (when you render a beat) make sure you choose "6-point hermite"... if it's "sync depth something" then that's the reason why it's taking forever to render lol :sweating:
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Re: Beat 14 - Feed Please

Postby Tash8 » Jul 6th, '07, 02:09

thanks for the feed mart...

and yea i just did that and it was a lil bit faster, it actually took 5 min instead of 15 min, anyways yea i'll mess around and show again :)
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Re: Beat 14 - Feed Please

Postby IceAxe » Jul 6th, '07, 02:19

Well.. i got here after what needed to be said has been said already. I think it is one of your best so far

good work :y:
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Re: Beat 14 - Feed Please

Postby Tash8 » Jul 6th, '07, 03:19

thanks :) updated:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2582922e33e98e/

bar i listened to you :)
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Re: Beat 14 - Feed Please

Postby Nu Syd » Jul 6th, '07, 16:28

Tash8 wrote:thanks :) updated:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2582922e33e98e/

bar i listened to you :)


cool man, at first the drums seemed to lack alil rhythm,but after listening again its iight,i like the melody and the guitar u used, pretty good man keep at it :b:
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