dr. dre style lol
sounds to random, the pattern switching is like here and there witch was wierd (from a rapping point of view)
but, the drums are nice n simple they work, the syhtn goin with the drums was nice, the electric guitar part was the best part of it all imo and i think you should have exploited it more, the other melodie was good also
i think at the electric guitar parts you should emphazise the guitar more and not so much the drums.
at the other melodie you should make it less notice-able
the hissing was strange, did you add that ? coz if it was supposed to be a vynil type effect, find another one lol
idk if its your best, all the parts are some of your best, but together as a beat it probably isnt..if that makes sense lol