well first of all, the main instrument you used is really weird
maybe you should something more simple to start
the drums were OK tho, I liked the part at 1:08... but it kinda sounded like the drums skipped throughout the beat, maybe it's just me, or just the mp3 I don't know
anyways, nice try for a first beat, but the main problem is the instrument you used and the melody, it's too weird
keep it up tho