you know what, for the one at the top, you should try a little something different... like, for now your beat is like: ta-da-da-da-da (at the last "da" you can hear a "saxophone"(?) note) and then there's the other ta-da-da-da-da without saxophone at the end... you should try to have a break between the two, and only leave drums...
ta-da-da-da-da (saxophone)
leave only drums for the next bar
ta-da-da-da-da
leave only drums for the next bar
(x2)
and then you add the part you already have... to have some kinda of build up...
adn try to make the kick a little louder