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My Own Beat

Postby Jay_LP1 » Jul 20th, '07, 21:00

So I thought of posting my own beat

Well I'll be using it for my own song . Just wanted the opinion of ur guys. It is only 46 secs demo and is not finished yet . Anyways here it is

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5576335
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Re: My Own Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jul 21st, '07, 17:55

i like your drums, not really feeling ur melody though, it's too choppy, and it'll get repetitive after 3 min of that, so i suggest you add back up melodies and something diff every here and then...


keep it up
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Re: My Own Beat

Postby CaptivatingVokalz » Jul 23rd, '07, 02:24

it's good but yeah it's too consistent. try adding more into it and i'm sure it'll turn out great. and with the addition of you rapping on it...it's sure to be better... don't let the beat make you - you make the beat
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Re: My Own Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jul 23rd, '07, 02:26

CaptivatingVokalz wrote:it's good but yeah it's too consistent. try adding more into it and i'm sure it'll turn out great. and with the addition of you rapping on it...it's sure to be better... don't let the beat make you - you make the beat


you mean too repetitive lol?
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Re: My Own Beat

Postby IceAxe » Jul 23rd, '07, 06:51

drums are cool... melody has some potential in it, but too repetitive as it is

keep at it :y:
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Re: My Own Beat

Postby Jay_LP1 » Jul 23rd, '07, 12:01

thnx for the reply guys

so I'll try adding some more to it :) :)
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