Ok, first audio.. Any help?

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My first ever *Recorded* rap (That I wasn't just fucking with, and actually kept) was just against Kojak. It's in the battle section, you can peep/vote here: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic. ... 7&p=520422

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=743577

But I'm making this thread here to ask with what I need help on...
Please, don't state obvious things such as my mic/delivery. I'm buying a new mic this week, this is a headset mic and it's busted to shit too, lol. My delivery is lower, almost like I'm reading, because I had to do it when my parents were home and they bitch if I'm too loud, lol. So, yeah.. What do you think of this?

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oki delivary was da first problem wen i read this.. since u cant put effort at the moment den fair enough..

it seems da beat is playin on da background while u were recording...

is it???

well dat could be a starting point for u..

make sure da beat is comin through ur head fones

clean up da vocals individually a lil bit
EQ it..
add limiters..

well addin da basic standards would do.. ( da presets )

and den mix it..
could have been a better output..

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Thanks, no the beat isn't in the background, lol. I dunno how to mix and all that shit. It's all done on COOL EDIT PRO 2, though. TA was gonna mix it for me, since I can't, but I just wanted to get it out quick.

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kool.......

da vocals could have been better mate and da ratio was way off..

u need to mix it right..

and wat da hell...there is always a time to start..