another try at rock/rap (need opinions!)

[mart85]

here's an old beat rock/rap I made, like 2 months ago... I waited before uploading it cause I wasn't sure, it's quite different than my other beats and I wasn't sure if it worked fine... but yesterday I listened to it and made some final adjustments and decided to upload it! so I'd like to get your opinions on it please

it's much slower/darker than my last rock/rap beat btw

Trapped In Hell
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 85960&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 85960&q=hi

oh and, believe it or not, the weird string melody you hear in the intro and in the hook, this is actually a guitar melody that I filtered like crazy lol

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yea its much slower than the other one....and me luved the other one
but the weird strings work

[mart85]

yea its much slower than the other one....and me luved the other one
but the weird strings work

thanks man

[Tash8]

can you saying the word "AMAZING"

i liked this, the guitar was soo dope!!!, how the hell do you make it sound that good??????????

[mart85]

thanks maybe

and thanks tash but

how the hell do you make it sound that good

are you talking about the guitar or the whole beat? if you're talking about the guitar, it was played by me... but I'm not that good, at least at playing the guitar lol, I'm a lot better to mix it tho... so it shows that real guitar sound much better than "fake" guitars lol, cause it's pretty much impossible to recreate the movement of the fingers on the guitar, with software

thanks again for the comments

[Tash8]

yea but you mixed it soo perfectly in, that it sounded like it done right infront of me..cuz idk but it seemed like you placed it with the stereo widner or whatever, inside more, so it sounded dope!

[DC4952]

Great Beat, i loved the guitar in it. very nice job on this

[randomghost]

thats some crazy shit man...am really feelin it

[mart85]

thanks for the comments everybody, I appreciate it!!

[Phantom]

mart you son of a gun

i listen to this, then to the beat im makin and i feel like a small schoolgirl lost in her first day of high school

anyways, man this is fuckin heat

if i could give more than 10 out of 10 i would but since i cant ill give it a 10 out of 10

hook is amazing, the whole beat is insanely perfect....one of the best i ever heard in my life

[Mc Cubz]

its fucking fire mate!

wud u mind if i did a song on it without paying u, obvisouly just for promotion?

[mart85]

mart you son of a gun

i listen to this, then to the beat im makin and i feel like a small schoolgirl lost in her first day of high school

anyways, man this is fuckin heat

if i could give more than 10 out of 10 i would but since i cant ill give it a 10 out of 10

hook is amazing, the whole beat is insanely perfect....one of the best i ever heard in my life

thanks man, I really appreciate that

and thanks cubz, I appreciate the comments... but sorry, I don't want to give this beat for free, I spent too much time on it lol

[HAYZI]

sick beat man, sounds pro!! id love to hear sumone make a track on this!

everything about it was perfect, the drums, effects, strings, guitar, piano, the mixin it was spot on must of taken hours. big props man

[mart85]

sick beat man, sounds pro!! id love to hear sumone make a track on this!

everything about it was perfect, the drums, effects, strings, guitar, piano, the mixin it was spot on must of taken hours. big props man

thanks man... and yeah I spent a lot of days on this, but not like 10 hours a day what I usually do is I try to compose the basics of the beat... and start to mix it... then I wait a couple of hours/ sometimes a couple of days and I come back and work on it again... then I wait again... and I work on it later etc... until I'm satisfied with it

[Xray]

great beat man sounds dope and pro...damn lucky bastards got all the samples and sounds downloaded while im on dial up dieing to get sounds