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New Beat-Same Story

Postby Phantom » Sep 23rd, '07, 01:09

this beat was inspired by marts beat a thousand times :wave:

let me know, this was done today

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=725178&songID=5799835

feed :y:
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Re: New Beat-Same Story

Postby Tash8 » Sep 23rd, '07, 01:32

i loved the drums... i like all the changes up in the verse, the build ups. the hook was real sick..
probably the best beat i've heard from you next to that other organ one

but yea really well mixed man!
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Re: New Beat-Same Story

Postby Phantom » Sep 23rd, '07, 01:34

thanks man
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Re: New Beat-Same Story

Postby IceAxe » Sep 23rd, '07, 01:40

The drums and bass were cool. Melody fit the drums well. The piano was a good addition. The chorus melody wasn't much of a change, but it fit perfectly. Only thing I'd suggest is to turn up the kick and snare a bit.
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Re: New Beat-Same Story

Postby Phantom » Sep 23rd, '07, 01:43

yeah your right. i never have been good at adding many counter-melodies to the main melody

ill look into that next time i make a beat, thanks for your feed Ice
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Re: New Beat-Same Story

Postby Ethos » Sep 24th, '07, 04:13

Hey pretty good. :y:
The first thing I can say right off is you have your own style. even though it was inspired by another beat. That's a good thing. Keep it up.
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Re: New Beat-Same Story

Postby mart85 » Sep 26th, '07, 18:27

you copied my beat :tounge2: lol j/k, to be honest I wouldn't have guessed it was inspired by one of my beats lol

the beat is nice... drum pattern is cool :y: like Ice said, it should be a bit louder tho I think... and I liked the different melodies you had in there, it kept the beat refreshing... you've got potential, keep it up :y:
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Re: New Beat-Same Story

Postby Phantom » Sep 27th, '07, 00:15

ok cool


thanks mart
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