Better Days

[Tash8]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5816370

I made this beat because someone requested it, so yea

i'm not feelin it, i like the piano but i don't like the mixing at all and i'm gonna remix it, cuz it was awful mixing, but if i can get tips on what to fix it, that would be great...

[mart85]

I thought the mixing wasn't that bad... maybe you didn't do a lot yet, but everything sounded pretty clean, drums should be a little louder maybe tho...

I think you tried to have a non-repetitive sounding beat, which is cool, but I thought it lacked a bit of "direction", like I wasn't sure about everything that came in, but it's not necessarily a negative point... it's original... but for an actual track, with vocals, I think it would need a better structure maybe...

the beat has potential tho, piano was cool

[Tash8]

I thought the mixing wasn't that bad... maybe you didn't do a lot yet, but everything sounded pretty clean, drums should be a little louder maybe tho...

I think you tried to have a non-repetitive sounding beat, which is cool, but I thought it lacked a bit of "direction", like I wasn't sure about everything that came in, but it's not necessarily a negative point... it's original... but for an actual track, with vocals, I think it would need a better structure maybe...

the beat has potential tho, piano was cool

thanks, i see what your saying with that, and yea your right.

[Tash8]

btw waht do you mean better structure?

the piano was just a 8 bar loop lol...

[mart85]

well I mean it's not really clear where is the hook, when the verse starts etc... (that's not necessarily a bad thing tho) and the melody is changing a lot, so it's harder to get into it (again, that's not a bad thing in itself) but it might be harder for people to rap/sing over the beat as it is right now

altho maybe after listening to the beat a few times, I'd "understand" it better

[Tash8]

well I mean it's not really clear where is the hook, when the verse starts etc... (that's not necessarily a bad thing tho) and the melody is changing a lot, so it's harder to get into it (again, that's not a bad thing in itself) but it might be harder for people to rap/sing over the beat as it is right now

altho maybe after listening to the beat a few times, I'd "understand" it better

oh oky, and the hook just has a flute difference. and yea i guess a loop should be shorter then.. thanks