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Feed On My Beats?

Postby HAYZI » Nov 20th, '07, 20:04

hey ppl ive not really shown ppl many of my beats and it wud be cool to hear sum opinons about whats good and whats lackin or any comments u have


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Re: Feed On My Beats?

Postby IceAxe » Nov 20th, '07, 20:22

Subliminal

The intro was tight. The drums fit good with the melody. It got kinda repetitive after a while, but vocals would probably fix that.

Trumped

The drums and bass fit well together. The melody was ok, but got kinda repetitive

The Hunt 2

Pretty cool, sounds like something from an action movie. The break-ish kind of beat fits good with the melody. The breath (?) hits were a nice touch, The melody was ok too.

Can U Show

I like the over all vibe to this one... The piano was a nice addition, and the melody was cool.

Overall you got some good beats, just needs a bit more variation in the melodies in some of em.
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Re: Feed On My Beats?

Postby HAYZI » Nov 20th, '07, 21:41

IceAxe wrote:Subliminal

The intro was tight. The drums fit good with the melody. It got kinda repetitive after a while, but vocals would probably fix that.

Trumped

The drums and bass fit well together. The melody was ok, but got kinda repetitive

The Hunt 2

Pretty cool, sounds like something from an action movie. The break-ish kind of beat fits good with the melody. The breath (?) hits were a nice touch, The melody was ok too.

Can U Show

I like the over all vibe to this one... The piano was a nice addition, and the melody was cool.

Overall you got some good beats, just needs a bit more variation in the melodies in some of em.




yeh i see what ur sayin, sometimes i think that too but i think the repetition of melodies is mainly cos of the lack of vocals, cos if u think about it all hip hop is generally a loop repeated


thanks for the feed man
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Re: Feed On My Beats?

Postby HAYZI » Nov 22nd, '07, 17:47

bump........
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Re: Feed On My Beats?

Postby mart85 » Nov 22nd, '07, 17:55

nice beats man... Subliminal was my favorite, real cool uptempo beat...

overall some advices I could give you is to try to practise your mixing... cause as far as melodies and patterns go, you're real good :y:
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Re: Feed On My Beats?

Postby HAYZI » Nov 22nd, '07, 22:45

mart85 wrote:nice beats man... Subliminal was my favorite, real cool uptempo beat...

overall some advices I could give you is to try to practise your mixing... cause as far as melodies and patterns go, you're real good :y:




thanksa for the feed man, ut rite about the mixin cos thats the borin bit and i generally dont bother unless its gonna be recorded on i just put intro then switch between the verse and chorus a few times then outro
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Re: Feed On My Beats?

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 23rd, '07, 00:26

subliminal was the best but there all pretty sick, you got a great style imo :y:

i agree that they need mixed better, but the creativity is there man :y:

keep it up :y:
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Re: Feed On My Beats?

Postby HAYZI » Nov 28th, '07, 20:20

thanx bar and buuump! :smoking:
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