2 New Beats + 1 Remake

[Ethos]

Yeah I tried a more soothing route to my beats and i thought I should post them and see what I would need and if ya'll like them.

The First beat I wanted to show is my remake of Put you on the Game Prod. by Timbaland. It was my first time reamking something so I thought I wanted to post it.

Put You On The Game (Prod. by Timbo) (Remade by Sy
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 10404&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 10404&q=hi

Next is a beat that my sister and I are using for a song we want to write. This was my first attempt at a soothing beat.

We're Family [Beat]
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 10431&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 10431&q=hi


and the last beat is my TR track beat. I used what I learned from my previous soothing beat and made this one. made me kinda proud. and I don't really think I'm gonna use it for the tape.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

the remake is kool man...dont feel the small break in it... lol...but yea nice thang

and we're family....i dont know drumz and melody is nice but it gets repetive very fast...maybe some twists in the melody ...know wut im sayin?

pce...keep ur work up

[Tomega]

why remaking a beat? you'll never top the original

but you did a good job man, dope beats

[Tash8]

why remaking a beat? you'll never top the original

but you did a good job man, dope beats

well

he could be remaking beats to help him look and learn from other producers, he might be looking at a different style than he usually does, by remaking he probably picks up a tip or two...

^ that's the reason i remake some, but i never release them or anything like that.

i'l'l feed later

[Ethos]

Thanks guys for the feed. means a lot.

@ Chris: the breaks in the remake are in the same positions as the actual track. it just sounds bad cuz no one's speaking over it to fill it in. and damn... you think it's too repetitive? I was trying to avoid that oh well. lol

@ Tomega: Yeah kinda like Tash said. I was remaking the beat to see 1) if i can do it right & 2) so i can pick up some experience.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

well...an advise maybe u just delete the low synths(or what it is) fo like 4bars and then set them back in....get me? so its not always throughout the same melody? hope u get wut im sayin?

[mart85]

yeah I agree with Chris... the "We're Family" beat is real nice, but the low strings(?) gets repetitive and I wasn't really feeling it to be honest, so yeah, getting rid of it or switching it up for a few bars would help IMO... but the rest was cool, good job on it

[Xray]

Loving the We Family Beat really something great man looking forward to the full son

[Phantom]

were family is struggling to find a correct melody

it jumps from emotional to sad to dark a lot. you need to find the right chord progression IMO to take it to the right emotion for that kinda song...

remake is tight, and the drums on were family r nice...


mess wit the melody and itll be tight

[Ethos]

Thanks all of you.I really need any heads ups that i can get for the we're family beat so then it'll be produced very well for the talent show. so thanks. I'll tweak with the melody and strings a little more. any other feed or comments?