Suggestion from pro beat makers

[Slovinec]

made this today in 2 hours, im a beginner so i need some pointers, i know tashkar is good, so from u would be great

im the best.mp3 - 4.84MB

[Tomega]

well for a beginner it is not bad.. but there are very few layers you use..
you had a drum line, a bass line and a very simple melody.. try to add more instruments, effects, variation and some kind of climax moments..

i think the melody is kinda mellow and good..

just listen to tash beats and check out my new beat.. you can learn from the parts you like on them.. You can also learn from bad beats, but keep making beats and keep posting them.. good job

[Slovinec]

well for a beginner it is not bad.. but there are very few layers you use..
you had a drum line, a bass line and a very simple melody.. try to add more instruments, effects, variation and some kind of climax moments..

i think the melody is kinda mellow and good..

just listen to tash beats and check out my new beat.. you can learn from the parts you like on them.. You can also learn from bad beats, but keep making beats and keep posting them.. good job

aight man thanks, didnt know there more beat makers here

[Xray]

There's quite a few. Mart85 and Tash8 are the top ones though.

[Slovinec]

yeah thats what i thought, never really talked to mart but he got some sick ones on his soundclickm and tash got really good ones

[Tash8]

well i'm not a pro but

those sounds u used, sound really fake... the bass is pretty cool, the main melody can be lowerd down in volume a bit cause it's a bit too loud imo.. it really needs more, feels real blank and empty... the hook is alright, but i think it's in the same octave and makes it just louder rather more full if you know i'm saying.

but not bad...