Techno Meets Rap Melody Only

[Xray]

I made this right now, I was messing with my keyboard than I touched a certain key, and a melody just came outta no where so I made it. It's a techno meets rap kinda melody, I haven't mixed/added anything to the sound, no drums either, this is just to see if people feel it, so let me know what you think of it.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56481163f4f5feca/

Feedback appreciated.

[<Stiiccy>]

it was ok man...i loved how you had techno in it...but still kept it underground...

when you add the drums make sure to have a real nice west coast type bass with an east coast type drum...

[Xray]

it was ok man...i loved how you had techno in it...but still kept it underground...

when you add the drums make sure to have a real nice west coast type bass with an east coast type drum...

Yeah great idea man, I'll definitely do that. Thanks for the feed.

[B.A.D.]

gave you fed on msn,, its real real good, I like the technoish sounds plus lay down style on hip hop, simply amazin

like sticcy said, u should add west coast drums

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

damn...sounds very unique....but sounded more like a long ass intro lol...
could imagine some emotional shit on it

[Tornado]

well before zshare fucked up, the intro sounded cool and catchy, on some emotional shit. Would like to see where you go with it

[Xray]

Thanks for the feed people. I'm still working on this beat, wrote a verse to it today I might post how it sounds right now, in a while.

[Tash8]

hate the sound but the melody is dope.

great job, but finish it and post it

[mart85]

yeah it's a cool melody it should be nice with other elements

[Xray]

Thanks.

[gutawafang]

Not bad man.

[Slim Zaddy]

yeah the sound is not bad either good , but i love the melody ,, if you give it more of your time it will be sick , i'm sure ,, gd job here bro