Two beats that I've been working on

[Robbie G]

These are my first two attempts at beats. The first one is a little softer and the second is more gangster.


http://www.zshare.net/audio/56801253869745cd/

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56843458e09198b2/

Thanks for any feed

[Slovinec]

well 1st off, the 1st beat would sound way better with diff sounds, cause those sounds were like i dont know weird, second beat same thing,, u did godd

[Tornado]

1st Beat, the drums were drowned out by the melody, raise them up.Also,sounds like there are A LOT of melodies in this beat, maybe use certain ones in certain sections to show the structure of the beat (although i'm guessing that it stays the same throuought evn thought its only 40 something seconds

2nd One I like, but sounds like it's not finished yet

[Robbie G]

Thanks for the feed guys.

I upped the volumes on the drums and it sounds much better imo.

[M-Pyre]

the sounds are fine, you just gotta mix it better!