2 Beats I made.. Please give some feedback(now in MP3)

[Myth]

Okay so this first one the beat kinda builds.. it starts out weak and its just a test version to see how all the instruments blend as they come in..

its not a final version you can hear the strings are a little off and there are a lot of gunshots as the beat builds but once the main beat comes in around 2:00 it blends and you can't hear the gunshots as annoyingly or distinctly, I intend to make the final version not build....

Listen to the whole thing and around 2 minutes the full beat is all together and thats what i want you to really judge. Lol some instruments are a little off beat. but thats cause its a live export and Its not the final version.

[URL = http://limelinx.com/files/5a75fb1c5b532 ... 548c1a8859


This next one is kinda a trippy song that someone could blaze to.. Its not so much a beat builder but it sounds best when all the sounds are together..

[URL = http://limelinx.com/files/e3cfe08c61c6d ... 4060cd7da2

Please give honest feedback and remember the songs are not a final version and they are not structured how they will end up being (Chorus.. hook etc) You have to understand I did a LIVE EXPORT. In other words I had to add instruments and silence them as it was recording.

EDIT: IN MP3 FORMAT so you can just preview.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

just a tip...do it in mp3..i mean its not that hard...
two clicks at max...lol
cuz nobody and me wont download a 40MB file....

[Myth]

just a tip...do it in mp3..i mean its not that hard...
two clicks at max...lol
cuz nobody and me wont download a 40MB file....

Lol alright.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

So Sick - Bass sounds ugly imo..this rasping or how u call it...the laser synth is a lil too loud imo....i like the drums in here...simple but effective...just the bass sounds too much like techno cuz of the rasping sounds...

Trippy - i can see how this is for blazing up lol..maybe in a different of mind state its a sick beat..i can see how the melody resembles the bubbles..in a way... anywayz
since i dont smoke pot and shit im not really a fan of those "weed" beats...tho the bass in here is kool better than the other...

[Myth]

So Sick - Bass sounds ugly imo..this rasping or how u call it...the laser synth is a lil too loud imo....i like the drums in here...simple but effective...just the bass sounds too much like techno cuz of the rasping sounds...

Trippy - i can see how this is for blazing up lol..maybe in a different of mind state its a sick beat..i can see how the melody resembles the bubbles..in a way... anywayz
since i dont smoke pot and shit im not really a fan of those "weed" beats...tho the bass in here is kool better than the other...

Thanks for the feedback man I really appreciate the honest criticizism.

I am really new to this so yeah, any criticizism helps