I'm not into the dark, grimy instrumentals, personally. (You said a lot of people wont like it..)
I like the beat except it kept sounding like it was skipping... If that was intentional, it needs to be taken out immediately. I like the drums, they're simple and sound good. The vibe of this is sick.. I could write something to it if you pm me a full version.
I don't have any new material up, but anyone who has heard me spit on tinychat knows I'm for real.