Drafts you will never finish

[Sam.]

yeah idk what this thread is but Sam never ghost for me

shits hilarious thought tho

[JamaicanPattlez]

This was an old verse I was gonna write with JamaicanPattlez and Geno, I was just coming out of a block...it was for our song "Hell On Earth" or something, but I ended up scrapping it and re-writing something completely different:

I'd say the lyrics on the page is when my spirits drains its rage
It's a shame this is off the dome so you should fear, insanely crazed
Rancid plagued razor blades Ale, G and Jamaican spray
If money talks then I'm a god since I'm makin' profits
Been like this since a baby? Nonsense, I'm Satan's lost kid
Welcome to my personality, dwellin' on this cursed reality
Depress kickin' in like angry journalists, is there a worse analogy?
Probly not, stop the clock< I gotta topic I wanna knock

I didn't even end up finishing it, it seems lmao Ugh...I feel so wack just reading it, although the "depress" line made me lol, maybe I'll use it again.

I don't think it's whack, but I liked the final version better. I completely forgot about this.

[Sam.]

JP's back!

Where you been?

[JamaicanPattlez]

JP's back!

Where you been?

I've been around man, haha. I notice you're back too! Decided to check out the CW finally after taking some time to really work on my writing and whatnot. I've swung around here and there but yeah!


... I was gonna say something cool and awesome about coming back, but I forgot what I was gonna say.

[Mr.DGAF]

Just post a link to Not Afraid man. That's the coolest way to address coming back.

[Sam.]

Welcome back, anyway. Something cool and awesome in my praise? Go ahead.

[JamaicanPattlez]

You guys should shut up and feed Ego's new drop.

Well, JP should. Sam already did.

I'm on it.

[Sam.]

This is part of the political verse that I was writing, didn't save it properly. Forget what I wrote, so when I went back and checked, all I found was this:

It's like obama sayin "I am still relevant”,
You’re either with us or against us,
"Opposed to terrorism" stop this worthless babble

I might finish this before apocalypse.

[SliK]

Good thread. Here's my contribution

So bad in bed this limp prick has to fake his orgasms
when i fuck your girl my dick twich can make her jaw spasm
after all, all that a thick bitch really takes is more dragging
pretty lucky i think that she didn't break my claw tractor (haha)
game's over, i win, better hit the brakes ya poor bastard
or i'll stomp ya fuckin' face, 'til it makes the floor shatter
i'm layin' waste to yall rappers, can you take some more laughter?
or ya sore as Gyllenhall after Heath had raped his poor asshole?
flow with such skill n force peeps mistake for lords rapture

That was written the first time I got baked after going months without getting stoned.

[SliK]

I wasn't very happy with it, it's a mess, and the rhymes are a bit too stretched in some points. But that's why I never posted it I guess. Thanks

[J.R.]

Track was called, "The Warning"
Was gonna be full of subliminal s. There's only one in that. lol.

I remember back when this forum was breathin with life,
Now everbody's borin me, feedin them big stars, your feelin me-
right? I don't wanna name drop, but I'm tired of seein feed on
people with the top-ic, like goddamit stop it! Haters seethe on,
Remember when new people joined and rapped? That'll forever be gone,
because we're too deep into our ego's, rap? What a laugh, more like sing along
One love for this place, but with all you "stars" taking feed, we runnin out of space!
And I was tryin' to fix it, but I'm bout to give up on that chase, I just can't save this (late!)
So that's right bitch, ima Ditch, like ding dong.

[Zellomugi]

Track was called, "The Warning"
Was gonna be full of subliminal s. There's only one in that. lol.

I remember back when this forum was breathin with life,
Now everbody's borin me, feedin them big stars, your feelin me-
right? I don't wanna name drop, but I'm tired of seein feed on
people with the top-ic, like goddamit stop it! Haters seethe on,
Remember when new people joined and rapped? That'll forever be gone,
because we're too deep into our ego's, rap? What a laugh, more like sing along
One love for this place, but with all you "stars" taking feed, we runnin out of space!
And I was tryin' to fix it, but I'm bout to give up on that chase, I just can't save this (late!)
So that's right bitch, ima Ditch, like ding dong.

glad you didnt finish. this sucks

[Eedee]

^ Not everyone is as good as you, Zello.

[Zellomugi]

^ Not everyone is as good as you, Zello.

im an asshole, just the way i am

[Eedee]

This is part of the political verse that I was writing, didn't save it properly. Forget what I wrote, so when I went back and checked, all I found was this:

It's like obama sayin "I am still relevant”,
You’re either with us or against us,
"Opposed to terrorism" stop this worthless babble

I might finish this before apocalypse.

"Either with us or against us" is a logical fallacy called false dichotomy..