by GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 10th, '10, 09:04
I liked it overall, but I didn't like the synth over the piano loop. I felt the G F# E G F# run was particularly weak. It's almost TOO in key. Try mixing in some accidentals or intermodular runs, so something stands out more. I'd recommend a descending melodic minor scale to fit over the loop.
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