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Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 21st, '10, 15:07

Nice English class keystyle, turned out real nice. Had a multi-gasm not gonna lie a few times. PS Shoutout to Mrs. Baumgartner, my composition teacher, FUCK YOU FOR FAILING ME YOU OLD CUNT. Enjoy

In the land of people rockin them mocasins where only the roughest go
Dare me to run with bare feet well my people have the toughest "soles",
The toughest flow, the swing of my ax to ya back oh how I love it so,
Like clearing the roughest throat my veins are Siberia Russian cold,
I'm fearing nothing so I'm here bustin domes while shearin ya muscle tone,
Starvinand bleeding bringin back scraps from the garden of Eden stealin the "apple" from this fucker's throat,
Let this fucker know exactly where my knuckles go,
Hey class, come take a look at my structure bro,
Off topic this blocks' blockin my way, Zu grab the cutters yo,
Native American people makin heroin needles stick straight in ya muscles (woah)
I'm fuckin yo busted flows in the open, flowing where the thunder rolls,
I'm somethin so, rugged, touch it leave with a busted skull,
I'm cussin so ya cousins know I'm comin with somethin cold but hey wat you runnin fo,
I'm runnin slow, micheal myers bustin flows, carvin ya fuckin dome until something shows,
Gravedancers racin, take cancer patients and ram there face in till they want some mo',
Fuckin ya mothers throat till it slits like her wrists, revive her then fuck your mothers soul,
She's screamin it's wonderful, wigglin an waving like 'the fuck you crumpin fo',
I run the show 100 lines that rhyme with only one to go,
Screamin FUCK THE COLD in my mocasins stompin it shit even the summer knows,


Runnin out of breath quick he needs more oxygen yall!
!00 pounds of multies won't leave till he's droppin em off
100 intact heads that scream when I'm choppin em all,
I'm stompin em all till the beads on my mocasins fall,

Listenin to the babbling of my Composition instructor,
English? I already speak it and I won't listen so fuck her,
I'm finding my teacher kill her behind the bleachers,
Bury her with the primal creatures who'd like to keep her,
You rhymin weaker, Me? I'ma different kinda of beast sure,
I'm so hardcore I'm usin knives and cleavers as sinus tweasers,
Comparin who's knive is cleaner but bitch mine is deeper,
Inside your features leavin you tastless an scarred I believe her,
This Native is hard leavin you faceless and charred and my wife is meaner,
I fight the reaper he uses his sickle well but my sickle cells made me find that dreams hurt,
I tried to leave dirt so I threw down my shovel to go find a clean shirt,
Arrive with weed sure to make Derdy and Roc bleed worse,
Surely you'll not bleed first with homo low blows to make your seeds burst,
Wait wat the hell does that mean seems like keys work,
Red chucks to leave you dead fucked and scream, curse,
Catch a head rush when the lead stuck until your dreams burst,
Strangle you with my dreamcatcher neck caught in the fine beadwork,
Stompin out your eyes with my red chucks they fresh but now you're blind to sneakers

I try to keep her alive but as soon as she said "wat",
I caught a headrush so know she's still with her head "bust"
All these bad things I've said so, she necro I say she's "dead fucked"
So until the lead rust I follow through your molecules with my red chucks
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Just Silver » Feb 21st, '10, 16:20

after this line "Like clearing the roughest throat my veins are Siberia Russian cold,"

it went multi crazy

real nice piece

9/10
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 21st, '10, 16:51

Yeah I wasnt plannin on doin a huge multi thing but I just started goin and couldnt stop lol Thanks for checkin bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 21st, '10, 19:14

Damn dude, this is like Fa-Q random...lotta great multis plus the flow...and I still lol'd at the Adam's apple line...
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Relapse.LP » Feb 21st, '10, 19:16

Damn, Yah, you kept your heat all these months. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 21st, '10, 19:34

Like a grizzly I keep that heat when I hibernate lmao Your still alive :o Thanks yall. Like I said its a keystyle just goin crazy tryin to get out of a block ya know.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Relapse.LP » Feb 21st, '10, 19:35

Yah-hah wrote:Like a grizzly I keep that heat when I hibernate lmao Your still alive :o Thanks yall. Like I said its a keystyle just goin crazy tryin to get out of a block ya know.

Just like you said, I was hibernating. :worship:

And keeping that body heat!
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby mcZu » Feb 22nd, '10, 02:01

I hope this surved it's purpose. Oh, wait, I know it did, you told me on MSN that you're out of that block, lol. I enjoyed reading it man, dope rhyme scheme. It might have been just rhyming for the sake of rhyming, but you were in a writers block.
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 22nd, '10, 02:41

In the land of people rockin them mocasins where only the roughest go
Dare me to run with bare feet well my people have the toughest "soles"

I'm fearing nothing so I'm here bustin domes while shearin ya muscle tone,
Starvinand bleeding bringin back scraps from the garden of Eden stealin the "apple" from this fucker's throat

It sure don't look like you're in a block to me.
That was incendiary.
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:01

Haha Zu lol. Yeah 4G I was in a block for the longest time and once I came up with that first line it was over lmao. Thanks for checking homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby gutawafang » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:20

Multis. :smoking:
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:23

Haha yo fisk I remember when I first started droppin and you said he liked my multis and Fa-Q said you masturbated to multies lmao. Well here ya go
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby gutawafang » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:24

Yah-hah wrote:Haha yo fisk I remember when I first started droppin and you said he liked my multis and Fa-Q said you masturbated to multies lmao. Well here ya go

Word man. Word. Multis was the shiz I was into back then. Still is. :smoking:
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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:25

Yeah me too lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mocasins and Red chucks

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:26

haha Jus i remember that :D
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