Serious Piano Beat

[Tornado]

Ok, i don't usually post beats but i want to see whether my skills have improved and to get different feedback from the usual especially considering this beat to me is more meaningful as i want to do a tribute song to close people who passed away in my life

Serious incomplete beat.mp3 - 6.03MB

any feedback/cristiscm is appreciated, let's not bullshit but thanks for checking

[Steve Spag]

Not bad, not bad man. Some of the piano notes seem a bit stale to me, but I like the overall tune of it, it's really unique. The hook is really sweet, havn't heard something like that before; really refreshing to hear something new!

It ain't the best beat but it deffinetly isn't the worst; keep at it man 'cause you got some potential (the only way to go is up)!

[Tornado]

thanks for the input man, appreciated

[Tash8]

piano sounds fake as heck and this is why... first ur piano sound isn't that sharp (mixing it could help) but the real issue is your playing...it sounds fake..and sometimes you hit notes that really just dont work together..the strings are cool..piano could sound good but it needs fixing ASAP..I'm waiting on the drums but? those chorus-like strings are ok but just too overpowering, couldd compress them and lower the volume, that way you can get that fullness but not so loud.

overall: ok beat, BUT has great potential...keep it up bro.

[Tornado]

Appericate the feedback man and taking the time to check it

[Tash8]

Appericate the feedback man and taking the time to check it

np man, let me hear if you change it or if you end up spitting over it.