Shredded Socialcontract

[mcZu]

How much more thoughts can I consume?
Food for thought, there’re more to come soon
So, I contemplate to con the contempt, due
To this template, hun, that is connected to you
What more can I do? I contacted you
You said ‘’why should I treat a con with tact, Zu?’’
Calling me liar, while I should attack you
‘cause you were the one who lied, so ask who-
..ever you want to, just vacate..
You and I, behold, disappearing contacts
‘cause, they say..
Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, I was wearing contacts
Though days sway..
And disappear in contracts, so I’m not on that
Appearing conflict that is inflicting pain on set
I refrain from dropping names, no bomb threat
Perception is bound to hit misconception
Along the lines of the climax of misdirection
Missing aspects in your climate that is affecting
Your sleeping pattern, dreaming bad, at turns
I wish I wouldn’t wish you bad things, nor curse
But at times, I wish I had the opportunity to curse
Part of the unity that exists first in my head
I stress this by treating my flaws with drugs like a nurse
Wait, I mean with puzzles to escape the hearse
Yet, I’m puzzled, craving to understand my own verse
I only cry from the inside, I cannot quench my thirst

Is this reality? I have to pinch myself first
Before I can get off that bench myself first
So I have to comprehend myself first..

[classthe_king]

This was crazy Zu lol, loved it

Glad to see you're posting again

[mcZu]

Thanks Class, 'preciate it.

[Spyder]

piece was alright for me, ive seen better from you
didnt realy get to deep on the topic for me. and alot of your bars seem like they repeat idk
seems like when i read a line i go back cause i thought it was there earlier... if im making sense

anyway not bad Zu

[Fa-Q]

good piece Zu, good meaning....I would like to see more multies from you though

[Arabian Shady]

i thought the begining of the verse had insane multies like for real, i thought it was really well written
the parts where you stop and start the flow reminds me of lupe, he does that alot.
Um i dunno i just didnt understand the concept behind it, like why'd you write this.
the verse is dope tho

[mcZu]

Thank you all for the feed, I appreciate it.

This verse is about me trying to shred my social contract with my ex.

About using more multies, yeah. I could, but I find it more important to express yourself to the fullest instead of giving that up in order to have more multies. Because sometimes you cannot use a multie to describe what's on your mind, not vivid enough at least. Well, at least for now I cannot, guess that's something I have to improve.

About having repetitive lines. It may seem like that because the plot revolves around my thoughts, starts off with doubting how much more I can take, then fading into trying to explain what happened and then back again trying to box away those thoughts in order to escape depression.

[dR3]

Wow, man. I'm impressed. For someone who doesn't speak English as his main language, this is awesomeness.

[X'ed Up]

Good piece. I like the content too

Great piece

[mcZu]

Wow, man. I'm impressed. For someone who doesn't speak English as his main language, this is awesomeness.

Thanks dR3, I appreciate it.

Good piece. I like the content too

Great piece

Thanks X, appreciate it.