Deception *updated*

[Fa-Q]

What in bloody hell is that? I can't be arsed to read that

Why Not ?

Because you wrote it like a paragraph...you need to write it like poetry

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See the difference....look at other people pieces if you're still confused

[Fa-Q]

I'm assuming you meant as is? Anyway yes, think of it as a run on sentence and each line is a period. Its hard enough to catch someones flow on text, let alone with no division...