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ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby Tash8 » May 9th, '10, 19:28

See I'm reachin for the stars set my feet up for the fall
get to leapin into mars and feel the feelings of afar
I got the wheels, I got the car, I got the weed and all ya'll
will never see me slip n fall cause gravity's reversed for me
I'm birthed to be the first mc with such a vast diversity
rappin with an urgency and certainly he won't let up
if he does he's coming with the W like two vendettas
just like that I'm back I been unpatient waiting infact
fuck a car--I'll use this flow to race you on a track
better yet, I'll flip a bitch and just erase (E-Race) you off this track
The reason that I rap, I say with such great certainty
so I vent out verbally thoughts that lately keep irkin me
workin me, quit your chirpin, shittin and running your mouth
you might run a marathon with the crap that your spewing out

Only one thing, better than the cream
Music, and the things that it brings
I'm a sing it like this oh oh oh
live it up like this oh oh oh

verse 2
I'm always down for having fun but my music comes first
haters you can bring it first come is first served
devious assault with words, noun, adjectives and verbs
predicates with proper etiqutes, the baddest of the jerks
If i get an rnb singer you would think i'm washed up
so i dry myself down and sing it for you damn fucks
it's kinda scary ain't it when you think statistically
i'm ten songs in and only now just got my versatility
and it just occurred to me unless of an emergency
i'm destined to contest the best, the legends' and their legacy
extravagently adamently battlin em all
standing swiftly so i'm ready set to damaging em all
when I blow the radiation will be some enourmous shit
I place the c-4 in my mouth i'm spraying out explosive spit
set up a perimeter and don't you dare get close to it
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby classthe_king » May 9th, '10, 19:31

Wow, this was really good. The best written thing i've ever read from you.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby Tash8 » May 9th, '10, 19:38

classthe_king wrote:Wow, this was really good. The best written thing i've ever read from you.


thx man...yes i finally decided to step up my rhymes and punches haha..kinda been focusing on my flow because of my new audio obsession..but I have a feeling this is going to be my best track yet.
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby Tash8 » May 9th, '10, 19:41

Geno wrote:
fuck a car--I'll use this flow to race you on a track


I like this line a lot. :y:

Good material. You should make it longer.


i have...i'm on verse 2 right now actually...will post that when i'm done.
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby classthe_king » May 9th, '10, 19:43

Tash8 wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Wow, this was really good. The best written thing i've ever read from you.


thx man...yes i finally decided to step up my rhymes and punches haha..kinda been focusing on my flow because of my new audio obsession..but I have a feeling this is going to be my best track yet.


Lyrically it's your best too, but I think this is the best flow I've seen from you too. It just all goes together so well. This is how I'm trying to get my pieces to flow like.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby Tash8 » May 9th, '10, 19:58

classthe_king wrote:
Tash8 wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Wow, this was really good. The best written thing i've ever read from you.


thx man...yes i finally decided to step up my rhymes and punches haha..kinda been focusing on my flow because of my new audio obsession..but I have a feeling this is going to be my best track yet.


Lyrically it's your best too, but I think this is the best flow I've seen from you too. It just all goes together so well. This is how I'm trying to get my pieces to flow like.


thx bro can't wait to record it for you guys
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby Tash8 » May 10th, '10, 23:57

verse 2
I'm always down for having fun but my music comes first
haters you can bring it first come is first served
devious assault with words, noun, adjectives and verbs
predicates with proper etiqutes, the baddest of the jerks
If i get an rnb singer you would think i'm washed up
so i dry myself down and sing it for you damn fucks
it's kinda scary ain't it when you think statistically
i'm ten songs in and only now just got my versatility
and it just occurred to me unless of an emergency
i'm destined to contest the best, the legends' and their legacy
extravagently adamently battlin em all
standing swiftly so i'm ready set to damaging em all
when I blow the radiation will be some enourmous shit
I place the c-4 in my mouth i'm spraying out explosive spit
set up a perimeter and don't you dare get close to it
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby Emadyville » May 11th, '10, 02:45

dope :smoking:

but you already know how I feel about this :flutter:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: ONLY ONE THING- music

Postby Tash8 » May 11th, '10, 23:25

Emadyville wrote:dope :smoking:

but you already know how I feel about this :flutter:


thx man
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