1:
you cant make it in the rap game, just slit your wrists, you wanna fight mother fucker well watch your head beat up my fists, ill show you 50 different ways i can make your neck do the fuckin twist, and dont get me mad cause while im writin this im already pissed, im the guy your gunna wish you never fuckin dissed, cause every punch line you through fuckin missed, and every mother fucker in the game is whos ass you kissed, and heres how this would go, id have you knocked out so fast you wouldnt even know, so you you faggot mother fucker, ya can give my dick a blow, actually no, yahd like that tho, this raps so good your gunna have to replay it in a slow-mo, speak outta line and the rest of your life youll be eatin through a feeding tube, theese rhymes melt you like im water and your a fuckin sugar cube.
2:
hold up hoe, let me boost ya, i got more cock than a mother fuckin roosta, im the fastest freestylist youll never get no fasta, im servin you up like a fuckin plate of pasta, your a grasshopper and im the fuckin kung fu masta, konichiwa, look at me the wrong way in 12 places ill break your fuckin jaw, craziest rapper any you mother fuckers ever saw, your full of diseases, i drop any mother fucker on the mic like i pleases, im unsinkable like noahs ark, and if i smashed you your face would be fuckin covered in stretch marks, i see more green then a fuckin natural tree park.
3:
my rhymes are so violent i shud be locked in the pen, and like al pacino im screamin SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND, see i always win battles its like a forever on going trend, im like a camelian, and raps my habbitat bitch i perfectly blend, and if i really wanted to hurt you youd already be dead, cause id stab you in the neck while your givin me head,leave you lyin stone cold on your fuckin death bed, make your whole body covered in red, did you hear what i just fuckin said, they tried to control me but my rhymes are too fuckin sick for meds, and i already got a hole dug 6 feet deep, so bitch shut your mouth i dont wanna hear a peep, im like a fuckin cirque de freak.
. I'm rather new, but creativity comes pretty easy to me. I make my friends laugh. Tips on structure?