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Re: don't you forget about me.

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 24th, '10, 21:44

don't don't don't don't

DON't YOU!
















FORGET ABOUT ME!!!
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dope piece yo
keep at it
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Re: don't you forget about me.

Postby gutawafang » Jun 25th, '10, 04:20

You're prolly that guy with the username "iPshycho". LOL!

man, I felt this man, the fucking flow is pretty good too. it's my cup of tea, in terms of flow and lyricism. sorta the same style as my writing, so I could relate better. nice man. keep it up. :y:
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Re: don't you forget about me.

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 25th, '10, 04:34

Damn man...noobie's got skills...loved this piece
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Re: don't you forget about me.

Postby Arrinef » Jun 25th, '10, 04:36

damn that shit is mad deep,
i kinda had to re-read some shit to fully get it

keep at it man, you got something going on
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Re: don't you forget about me.

Postby Dark Blue » Jun 27th, '10, 02:17

liking this alot :y:
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: don't you forget about me.

Postby wrestler1256 » Jun 27th, '10, 07:44

nice dude, solid verse for sure
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Re: don't you forget about me.

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '10, 04:34

That was pretty damn good man, something about your writing style is very similar to mine in this topic. Will be checking up on your next drops.
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