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[Just Silver]

Extremely quick keystyle I want to get hyped for a song but only time i feel like it im either not at my house or somethin else



I rock beats like I take it for "granite"
I make the world shake "flee" right off of this planet
Im white with an often advantage, spice with no Spanish
Im right but don't manage, to know how
I unfold sound, from a music "box"
I do what i do know from my aftershocks
Get mad get hot, been moments stressed
Like the syllables after vocal workout reps
"Dice" of lyrical shatters wont go turn out "guest"
So as that goes I stand on glass toes
A man that sacks flows, who ball on the rose bowl
Ok to "Oh no", soaked shades bloodiest promo
Agree or see the beast in me you unleashed

[Fa-Q]

Whole thing was crazy good starting with the first line...loved it...you do need to work on your stucture...it'll make it a lot more pleasing to the eyes

[Just Silver]

Whole thing was crazy good starting with the first line...loved it...you do need to work on your stucture...it'll make it a lot more pleasing to the eyes

Thank You

[BILI]

I liked that first bar the most,everything else was good 2(except that 2nd bar,what does "know how" rhymes with?),I just dont get it how you have 13 lines

[Just Silver]

I liked that first bar the most,everything else was good 2(except that 2nd bar,what does "know how" rhymes with?),I just dont get it how you have 13 lines

"Unfold sound"

[BILI]

I liked that first bar the most,everything else was good 2(except that 2nd bar,what does "know how" rhymes with?),I just dont get it how you have 13 lines

"Unfold sound"

But dont the end of lines need to rhyme,maybe I`m wrong,but for me thats the only week point of this drop

[Just Silver]

I liked that first bar the most,everything else was good 2(except that 2nd bar,what does "know how" rhymes with?),I just dont get it how you have 13 lines

"Unfold sound"

But dont the end of lines need to rhyme,maybe I`m wrong,but for me thats the only week point of this drop

This would be true but it meant i changed up the flow when i placed the comma

[BILI]

This would be true but it meant i changed up the flow when i placed the comma

Ok,cool then,I just prefer having rhymes at the end of the line,lol