Fa-Q - Over and Over

[Fa-Q]

She was the girl, that when she enters, she always turns heads,
And with dreams of her fiery spirit, she always burns beds,
I just wanted to make her feel beauitiful, I said tell me ways,
I wanted to protect her forever, I'll fight like its hell to raise,
I searched high and low, and I drank from your well in Maize,
But it was like a bottomless pit, and I sure fell in dazed,
It was an unbearable pain, it was almost too much to stand,
When that night, I would have done anything to touch your hand,
I looked in her eyes, I never knew that those two slivers of brown,
Could give me the greatest chill, it was new shivers I found,
A flower of her caliber, blossoms, and then withers the ground,
I felt traces of anger, tracing of being lost, my heart is freeing frost,
I had to stop myself from losing it, like I'm told this loiter strays,
Venus herself could not match her beauty, but she ignored her praise,
And then what happened, things changed when we crossed paths,
I would smile, you would smile, but its like we lost laughs,

Over and over, I keep going over the world with you,
Once when you, won't beside me,

Am I Zues, are you my first love, are you my Aphrodite,
I hope you know, because of you, I always laugh at night,
And if she's a mistake, I'll ways prefer that I'm wrong,
Because lately she's becoming, every word to my song,
And she was a mistake, but how do I turn back time,
Confuscious is confusing, but somehow I must learn that rhyme,
I arm wrestle with depression, so now I must tame anger,
This fuckin cat and dog, going back and forth, game's stranger,
I fall victim to it, I slip and fall for a girl, in the same danger,
Girls turn out to be all the same, there's just a name changer,
For the tears that fall effortlessly, I need drains and gutters,
Searching for her, all girls are the same, dames and mothers,
Looking for her, ignoring the window's panes and shutters,
Her leaving, without saying goodbye, that's the only sight dreaded,
I try to think of the happy times, but that makes me light headed,
She makes me sick to my stomach, I wish I could fight medics,

Over and over, I keep going over the world with you,
Once when you, won't beside me,

My soul forgotton I died so slowly inside, so lonely I hide,
I guess its about time, maybe I should have to bury my heart,
And over the threshhold I carry it, that or carry the part,
Past all the parts of my terrible love life, the tough times,
I should split a quarter of a nickel, I've had enough dimes,
For I've had more than a man should bear, I know it could scare,
Anyone, whose never had one of these cancerous broken hearts,
Broken hearts, green with envy, that's where the smokin starts,
They throw out this joker, and keep all their hearts and diamonds,
I've found, the sides of my eyes, that parts for crying,
I tried, just for you, to not be such a fucking smart ass,
It took forever, but I gave up, and that parts passed,
And I know from past experiences, that if you heard this song,
You'd deny every claim, and say every word is wrong,
I hope one day your heart is broken, so you know how it feels,
I've got this off my chest, my heart can breathe, now it heals,

Over and over, I keep going over the world with you,
Once when you, won't beside me,

[Fa-Q]

Bump

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fuckin bump

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Fuck CW now

[Just Silver]

Very poetic and emotional nice piece

I myself stopped writing because the whole no one says anything

I really like your work ethic guy, the only thing i thought was out of place was the chorus part "Once when you, won't beside me," idk maybe its just me

Overall good shit

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Silv, yea the chorus is from Shadowville...I think the producer sampled Michael Buble...and so it sounds dope trust me...thanks for the feed that none of us get anymorÉ

[BILI]

Well man that was dope,I really felt it,your multies are dope.2nd verse is my fav,oh and can you give me a link to that hook,so that I can get a better feel

[Fa-Q]

Thanks a lot BILI

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[gutawafang]

I like how you use visualizations to create your punchlines man. It's like you entice the readers by making them imagine certain images you lay in words man. It's very original, inspirational to me man. I'll probably try it soon.

I won't comment on your fucking multis anymore man, cuz your multis are consistent in every drop man. Might as well I don't mention it at all.

Um, I don't understand the hook/chorus. LOL. but fuck that. the verses are very awesome.

[Fa-Q]

Haha wow thanks a lot Guta...yea the chorus is from a shadowville beat so the chorus might not make much sense but it sounds dope on the beat...thanks for the feed

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