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Stand Back Or Die.

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 5th, '10, 01:13

Demonic-Possession.. Every lyric mystic with The-Chronic-I'm-Pressin...
Hypnotic-Agression... The-Phonics-Are-Legend...
Dismembering... Remembering.. All the Embers-In..
Pandora's box, I Opened-It and Toked-The-Spit of Nephilims..
Glow with Aurora's of Pestilence, and Eleventh-Sin...
Stepping-In a heavenly Breeze, spitting A-Menance-Wind..
Operating Tables, Are Populating-And-Fatal..
I'm Able, To Disable pain receptors with train Station Cables..
Capable of killing Orphans-You-See...
Cause I'll leave their Chest Caved like it's Marfans-Disease...
Every Corpse ripped at Source and I'm Forcing-the-Speed..
Like a Porshe, cause of Course I'm Endorsing-The-Need...
No Remorse, I'm a maniac, Desiring-Rage...
Spitting the Fire-From-Page Higher-Like-Mage Tired-From-Age...
Hospitality is Killed wit the Gun-And-Da-Flame
Cause' All ya rappers are like Pills, yall are One-And-The-Same..
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby Unscarred » Jul 5th, '10, 01:16

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“The individual has always had to struggle to keep from being overwhelmed by the tribe. If you try it, you will be lonely often, and sometimes frightened. But no price is too high to pay for the privilege of owning yourself.”
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 01:18

Unscarred wrote:Image

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

Damn I lol`d so hard my ribs hurt me,its better if you read his drop and then see that dog :worship:
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 5th, '10, 01:18

Unscarred wrote:Image

What is this supposed to insinuate....
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 5th, '10, 01:32

Damn :o
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 01:35

R.A.G.E In Darkness wrote:
Unscarred wrote:Image

What is this supposed to insinuate....

He always posts those dope gifs,he and Dark45.Those gifs are funny as fuck

On Topic:Your drop was dope man,had awesome multies,flow was on point,everything was :worship:
Hope you`ll stay on the site and drop some dope shit like that
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 5th, '10, 01:39

BILI wrote:
R.A.G.E In Darkness wrote:
Unscarred wrote:Image

What is this supposed to insinuate....

He always posts those dope gifs,he and Dark45.Those gifs are funny as fuck

On Topic:Your drop was dope man,had awesome multies,flow was on point,everything was :worship:
Hope you`ll stay on the site and drop some dope shit like that

Thank you..
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby Unscarred » Jul 5th, '10, 01:53

No offence man, just thought to post something random :whistle:
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 5th, '10, 01:56

What did you think of my piece..?
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby Unscarred » Jul 5th, '10, 02:00

Awesome :y: Like Bili said everything was on point
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 02:11

After I read it again,its even dopper,damn homie,you could be one of the doppest writters on site.

I`m just curious,what do you listen to?
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 5th, '10, 02:20

BILI wrote:After I read it again,its even dopper,damn homie,you could be one of the doppest writters on site.

I`m just curious,what do you listen to?

I get inspiration from a lot of rappers...

Mainly NaS and Eminem...
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby gutawafang » Jul 5th, '10, 02:27

Canibus. :wave:
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby R.A.G.E In Darkness » Jul 5th, '10, 02:30

gutawafang wrote:Canibus. :wave:

What..?
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Re: Stand Back Or Die.

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 02:31

R.A.G.E In Darkness wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Canibus. :wave:

What..?

He thinks your style is similar to Canibus,you know?That dope rapper :worship:

I would take it as a compliment,even tho I think your style is different from his
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