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Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

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Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 6th, '10, 07:31

I'ma kill you with this beat: http://www.shadowville.com/1115/genres/gangsta-beats/dont-push-me

[Verse 1]
Okay homey I don't understand you or your wack raps,
Common sense your rap lacks, this is the backlash,
Of dissing someone superior to your pathetic skill,
For real everything I've said homey I've said it ill,
Shit dawg, I'm a bad doctor man, I have no patience,
Reject a boy shot with a bullet giving brain inflations,
They call me John-117 cause I'm the Master Chief,
You're everyones favorite biter, the master thief,
If your ass is gonna beef me then bring your balls,
Who do you talk about in your raps, ya sing to walls?
I'm wasting my time dissing a faggot college kid,
Go get ya knowledge kid, forget rap your not legit,
When I post this shit you're gonna fucking praise it,
Cause you know you lost and that's how ya face it,
At least you don't front you know your a honkey, (no disrespect to my white homies lol)
Motherfucka stop kissing ass Solace ain't no donkey,

[Hook]x2
Don't (Fuck with a guy you don't know)
Push (Shove or clash with me, oh no)
Me (Is psyched to see you bleed)
Or I'll finish your bitch-ass finally

Verse 2 coming up if bitchboy responds to this
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby Enimee » Jul 6th, '10, 11:46

ite no offence but that recycled patient line killed it for me that shit was fuckin garbage bro like for real, and the said it ill...yeah u swag jackin homey and the rest was lame, weak punches and idk shit was garbage dog i was dissapointed and im still pissed i read the whole thing expectin you to come hard....

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weak
and the honkey line was stupid
i mean
idk i wish i culd give better feed but i think it was disgusting personally i mean you rhymed, and you flowed sorta decent which is better then most
but your content was cockamainee haccckk tooee
no worth the phlem of a al paca
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 6th, '10, 19:26

OK ? dickrider
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby Just Silver » Jul 6th, '10, 19:53

It was ok

But Bullet isnt in college so idk where that came from
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 6th, '10, 19:55

Just Silver wrote:It was ok

But Bullet isnt in college so idk where that came from

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=92027&start=0
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 6th, '10, 23:22

i've been in college, usually keeep that secret and lie and say "o yea im 15!" but no im really in college and im 21...
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 9th, '10, 10:47

I quite like it. :happy:
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 9th, '10, 21:44

gutawafang wrote:I quite like it. :happy:

and you dont like mine? :tapping:
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 10th, '10, 08:30

bullet_boy46 wrote:
gutawafang wrote:I quite like it. :happy:

and you dont like mine? :tapping:

didn't say that. :)
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 10th, '10, 21:49

gutawafang wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:
gutawafang wrote:I quite like it. :happy:

and you dont like mine? :tapping:

didn't say that. :)

lol i kno
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Re: Don't Push Me (BitchBoy Diss)

Postby 77o77 » Jul 11th, '10, 09:44

gutawafang wrote:I quite like it. :happy:
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

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