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Postby Robot » Jul 9th, '10, 05:11

Make way for the weakest opponent on TR,
How long will I make this last, or how long WILL THIS LAST,
Fuck the past I'm gonna spit this shit like they use to in the past,
So time to take off the this mask & reveal my true identity,
He appears from the dark, he is so metal & he is ready to top the charts,
He is ready to leave a fucking mark on the witness for these blue bitches (cops) to see who is the illest in this game,
Someone is just trying to spit the same lame shit he is trying to pull,
That's why there are so many fucking loss's in this game, but that's cool,
Don't mistake me for no fool,
I'm as hard a tool,
Remember I'm a Robot, never been caught, smoking that doujah,
So what the fuck is up with ya'll ?,
Take it easy on this Robot,
I promise I won't use my heat vision to destroy you after you murder me,
Just let me be and give me credit for my game G... :smoking:
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Re: Untitled

Postby Just Silver » Jul 9th, '10, 05:18

wait are u dissing yourself :confusion:
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Re: Untitled

Postby Robot » Jul 9th, '10, 05:24

Just Silver wrote:wait are u dissing yourself :confusion:



You found my Slim Shady side, lol... Yeah :wave:
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Re: Untitled

Postby gutawafang » Jul 9th, '10, 05:49

Blahahahahahhaa. :laughing: why don't you RHYME man?

You got to RHYME if this is meant for a rap. Otherwise, seriously it sounds like a blog post man! :D

But the subject matter is cool. Sorta like an introduction. :y: Keep practicing homie. :flower:
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Re: Untitled

Postby Element. » Jul 9th, '10, 07:22

you need to sort out your structure and rhyme more, and why diss yourself?
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Re: Untitled

Postby Robot » Jul 10th, '10, 00:59

Element. wrote:you need to sort out your structure and rhyme more, and why diss yourself?


No need to diss anybody on here, :y:
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Re: Untitled

Postby Robot » Jul 10th, '10, 01:00

gutawafang wrote:Blahahahahahhaa. :laughing: why don't you RHYME man?

You got to RHYME if this is meant for a rap. Otherwise, seriously it sounds like a blog post man! :D

But the subject matter is cool. Sorta like an introduction. :y: Keep practicing homie. :flower:


Thanks, i'll try that lol.. :D
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