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Postby mcZu » Jul 8th, '10, 01:26

Charismatic, almost magic like, my head in the clouds, the sun my attic
Hard to get, ironically, her name means troublesome in Arabic
While I’m at it, sparks when I see her, arousal with static
Stomach acting all acrobatic, belongs in her own class, aristocratic,
She has me gasping for air, I start to act all asthmatic
They way her body moves is like I’m watching superb cinematic
I never knew I would act all dramatic, and to back it
Up, all I had to do was to be a lil’ more fanatic, or act sick
Emotions are causing the inside of my chest to turn magmatic
I don’t know if I can have it, this kind of love is warfare tactics
Bound, so I be fair and have a laugh at it, while I decide to be more active
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Postby dR3 » Jul 8th, '10, 03:35

I have said it before, and I'll say it again. You're damn impressive even though English isn't your native language.
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Postby mcZu » Jul 8th, '10, 14:26

Thanks, dR3. Appreciate it, man.
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Postby Just Silver » Jul 9th, '10, 04:43

Flow in the beginning was so-so but then really turned impressive good stuff

Never knew English was your second language

PS. How would you be pronouncing Arabic ?
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Postby gutawafang » Jul 9th, '10, 06:07

Just Silver wrote:
PS. How would you be pronouncing Arabic ?

Rhymes with air magic.

Nice multis man. Consistent as hell. Fucking good read. looking forward to more. :y:
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