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Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 9th, '10, 15:45

Something I did up real quick to fuck whatever lil writers block I have in the ass....
& before I give my 6K shoutout.....
I wanna give a quick shout out right now to:

Chambers, Class, Sticcy, Coleon, & Anonymous :b:

no reason for the shouout....
just wanted to holler @ some beasts

anyways....




Don't be tripping on the kid because I'm sicker-than-most-cats
I stay "Half Baked" like Dave Chapelle delivering-dope-sacks
When I die.....I'll still be smoking like i'm Ivory in How High
so best believe I'll always be floating on top of cloud 9
I stay beast even If I'm kicking that simple shit
you couldn't get it popping if you busted one of your pimples kid
Imma spend my lifetime making-music-for-the-deaf
with my boy Anonymous shaking-screws-up-in-your-head
I'm "Violent By Design" but not from Jedi Mind Tricks
You can catch the flu, rap a verse of mine but never "rhyme sick"
you'll never find this....kid kicking a wack verse
I'll go hard untill I'm laying inside of a black hearse
I'm still smoking like that movie from Cheech & Chong
so fuck the haters I'll just sit back & squeeze a bong
keep living everyday like my last day
till I'm nothing but dust inside an ashtray
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Re: CruiSe ConTroL

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 9th, '10, 17:55

Ƨteven© wrote:can u explain the dave chappell line, is it a punch? i dont really get it lol.

:y:



You ever seen the movie half baked?
I don't really know where I went with it
I think I said Half Baked because in the movie Dave's character slangs weed to a bunch of people
so in the end hes gonna half baked because all the places he went selling weed & dealing with people

:sweating:

lol

don't smoke crack kids
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Re: CruiSe ConTroL

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 9th, '10, 17:59

nawww man I do alotta of the stuff I do here without a beat :sweating:
thats why the flows a lil shakey here
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Re: CruiSe ConTroL

Postby classthe_king » Jul 9th, '10, 22:37

Awhhhh thanks :wub:

sick verse man, hope you get your recording situation over with soon :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: CruiSe ConTroL

Postby Just Silver » Jul 9th, '10, 22:48

Likin this piece

Saw the half baked line on your facebook status that was nice
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Re: CruiSe ConTroL

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 9th, '10, 23:06

This was off the hook :worship:

Didn´t understand the Half Baked line until you explained it.
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Re: CruiSe ConTroL

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 10th, '10, 10:50

ahhhhh glad you guys liked
my oh my do I have treats for you whenever I get new equipment :smoking:
quick bump before I crash
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