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Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 7th, '10, 00:05

mother fucker, you think we even now?
see all the squeezing got you pleading, wow
the heathens out, told you I was evil, you believe ME now?
you leaking with nothing keeping you from bleeding out
sneak in ya house, creeping around with pieces out
peace is out, tried to come up but you made mistakes
you fucked up, an youll know when i pull the razor blade
todays the day, youll pay, shoulda just stayed away
its safe to say, im the reason no haters safe today
yesterday you was climbing but you falling now
crawling round, begging for help an calling out
nobody coming dude, im stuffing you and dumping you
oh he was frontin too? then fuck it im gonna dungeon you
torture you, its horrible, but dawg know what i oughta do?
frogger you, toss you in front of cars can you dodge a coupe?
man you lose, hopped one, but on the next 5 body parts you lose
its awful, think you got off but we stalking you and slaughter you
making up ways to make you pay is taking me to new places
you getting wasted like maud flanders when the cannons are blazing
this is character assassination, and ill play the part of matt groening
its crazy an shady but the games on an now we playing
like jason i chased em, tased em, taped em, raped em, and then erased em
i faced em with a mace gun and sprayed em theres no escape from them
this anger its raging, kept it caged but now its breaking
the patience has faded, its too late the demon is waking
so if you tryin wake up early enough to pull wool over my eyes
youll open your eyes to me and my boys standin over you wit toasters. SURPRISE!
theres no contender all get hustled and enter a raw tussle
your spits wont be "torchin" til i sever your jaw muscle. (tore chin)

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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 7th, '10, 00:27

feed this shiz :coffee:
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby Enimee » Jul 7th, '10, 01:24

tore chin? lol waaaaaaat, shit was dope i can dig it, eat um alive bboy str8 drop 4 real
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 7th, '10, 02:05

Enimee wrote:tore chin? lol waaaaaaat, shit was dope i can dig it, eat um alive bboy str8 drop 4 real


TORCHIN, get it? "tore chin" rip jaw muscle
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby 77o77 » Jul 7th, '10, 05:43

bullet_boy46 wrote:
Enimee wrote:tore chin? lol waaaaaaat, shit was dope i can dig it, eat um alive bboy str8 drop 4 real


TORCHIN, get it? "tore chin" rip jaw muscle

ahhhhhh
CJ IS MY BOI THO. :angry:
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby dR3 » Jul 7th, '10, 18:18

Luv ya CJ, but this shit is off the hoooooooook!
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 7th, '10, 18:40

thanks for feed, im going harder then usually, see when he responds
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby 77o77 » Jul 7th, '10, 19:28

dR.dR3 wrote:Luv ya CJ, but this shit is off the hoooooooook!
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 7th, '10, 21:38

DIZ B3 GARB4GE SON.
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 9th, '10, 05:29

ChronicJon wrote:DIZ B3 GARB4GE SON.

:worship: What happened to your Avy? :o
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 9th, '10, 18:08

gutawafang wrote:
ChronicJon wrote:DIZ B3 GARB4GE SON.

:worship: What happened to your Avy? :o

You can´t see 2Pac? :'(
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Re: Please (BJ- ChronicJon Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 9th, '10, 21:40

ChronicJon wrote:
gutawafang wrote:
ChronicJon wrote:DIZ B3 GARB4GE SON.

:worship: What happened to your Avy? :o

You can´t see 2Pac? :'(

it says "user avatar" thats it...
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