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Getting R.i.D of em' (Who?) ... J Roc & Derdy PK

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Getting R.i.D of em' (Who?) ... J Roc & Derdy PK

Postby J Roc » Jul 10th, '10, 12:05

Derdy-Minded PK:
I been doing this forever. Fuck what rude kids say
Your a vet? please...I wrote lyrics all threw 6th grade
a fews years later i'm the cream of the crop
you wanna be the king? you can dream all you want
but your still not close to that. barley approaching
You wanna go with the gods? tell me what you'v been smoking
not the "Canibus" though cause you cant stand his voice?
you just jealous of him because he's out there making noise
Anonymous could care less for text-writing-rookies
ask us about your raps? where's the next-frighting-pussy?
it's obvious you wack like a chronic masturbater
you stash them bars away & keep the good raps for later
you couldn't beat me if you gave me a handjob
you think you gonna come hard? we know that this man's soft
he appeared outta nowhere pulling a quick one?
your verses was iight but it's better if you quit son..

J Crackrockz:
The Worst Has Come, Steven n RAGE Getting Dissed For Thinking Their Third To none Yo
'Roc Verses This Chickens?' Ya'll Know What Happens With 2 Birds And 1 Stone
These Lames Accepting Defeat Yup, Since i 'Roc(k)' This is like 'RAGE Against the Machine' Gun? pfft
We Come Devilish, Cuz Only Time 'Derdy w/ RAGE' Was Mud Wrestling, So Fuck Texting Shit
Cuz the Question Has Sprout, didn't we already Settle this bout?? (Ummm...)
I Merked Coleon .. BADLY ... So now i think it's fair that i Gotta Face his Second Account ??? lol
(Roc-ur-a-Douche!) Naw Just Copy-My-Moves And Repeat My Others
Time to Eat & Beeef Is Suppper, If you and Sherry Mul-tiply Then 'Love-Is-Blind' For Stevey Wonder
Jesus Christ! She's the Reason Why You Sleep & Cry? U Can only get girls when their E-Online
Dont' Sit-&-Smile Cuz ur In-Denial If u think 3 of ur bars equals 3 of Mine! pfft Yea Right!
Thinking i fib? Everything I Spits-a-Fact i'm Getting-'Madd' but i ain't Drinking a Bit
so Listen To This, nobody wants to be Ame I Wouldn't even 'Be Strictt' On My Kids !
The King Is J , Have ur Ass-Cornered by a Fast-Fourwordd Without Hitting Play
His Sight-Is-a-broad? his motto : Keep ur 'Eye-on-the-ball' But i don't 'Swing-That-Way'
ur Makin me Vomit Ur Gay Thats a Promise, What else can i Take outta Context?
Ur Ex Hating ur nonsense cuz she's who Roc-Dates Cuz u Got-'Played' Like Your Concepts

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Kee-stile Time!
Assisted Suicide? Yeaaa i Can Help You With It
Ur intestines were like a Belt To Ur Neck
but when i pushed him off the chair, he never fell to his death
his intestines never snapped, so he was held in suspense
U Like Shrek 2, a Nerd With no 'dope' or 'guns' yet he's 'High-Tech' Tooo
But You'll Never 'Son-J' Cause Afterall, Your Wife Left You .. lol

Sorrryy The Message Above Was Adding Insult To Injury,
Thats What i get for wanting to Diss All These Mini-Me's
Gooodbye I'll See You All In-Hell Or Italy
cuz I'll be chillling there with a Pitchfork identity

Super light ... hungover n burnt out so it's allll i'm laying on u lames for today
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Re: Getting R.i.D of em' (Who?) ... J Roc & Derdy PK

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 10th, '10, 20:13

Image light it up freaks

Love your verse Jay
pretty dope stuff for being lightwork
I hope we can get down on another piece again :worship:
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Re: Getting R.i.D of em' (Who?) ... J Roc & Derdy PK

Postby J Roc » Jul 11th, '10, 21:10

WORD , nice verse mazeeeen

@ Steven , addd me i donnno ur addy lol

[email protected] Get at me
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Re: Getting R.i.D of em' (Who?) ... J Roc & Derdy PK

Postby Solace » Jul 12th, '10, 02:47

J Roc went insane on this, DerdyPK was dope too but Roccy just shineeed.
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