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Triple 6

Postby Solace » Jul 12th, '10, 03:23

Back is scratched with blatant acts of mad and savage hatred,
My soul, they had to take it and now they're back to break it,
Backstabbed assassination to unleash a caged and raging beast,
Amazing, creeps with rabies, leech-es on the way we speak,
My brain maybe slower but I hesitate for it to take me over,
I'm breaking over, tripping tipsy even though I'm crazy sober,
Oh today is colder, now I feel something tryna crack my neck,
Laced with awe, shake it off and fall as I try to catch my breath,
And now I rap my death there's a voice that I'm hearing speak,
It's nearing me, murder murder it just whispers eerily,
I'm tearing, cheeks are encumbered by a frozen winter lake,
My thoughts are bitter, breaks into pieces as I shiver shake,
Blood drips from my lips, and though I'd fight for what I miss,
I'm holding steady, ready to accept my fate and life for what it is,
I'm sitting in the cold, wet, dark, surroundings are stiffly potent,
Start to grip my clothes, I feel impact of my chest ripping open.
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Re: Triple 6

Postby gutawafang » Jul 12th, '10, 04:02

Woohoo! I love this! :worship:

Flow is the shiznit here. :flower:
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Re: Triple 6

Postby neversnooze » Jul 14th, '10, 05:36

this was dope. the flow was great, from start to finish. the last two lines kind of gave me the chills :) . not much else to say except "good job". :y:
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Re: Triple 6

Postby Solace » Jul 20th, '10, 03:59

Bump for feed leeching.
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Re: Triple 6

Postby Solace » Jul 20th, '10, 21:39

When I saw that you commented on this I expected a lot of hate or something and I am happily relieved, thanks for checking (appreciated of course).
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