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A Diss To Me

Postby Robot » Jul 12th, '10, 19:14

Your Not Human Your Just A Robot,
You Lost Your Battles Numerous Of Times,
So Why Do You Even Try To Compete With Somebody "You Know Your Not Gonna Win" With ?,
But I Won't Let The Losses Or Wins Get Me To Quit,
No Matter How Many Times Those Losses Make Me Feel Like Shit,
I "Won't Back Down" & Look Like A Coward,
Stephen You Better Fucking Get Your Shit Straight Or Else Howard Is Gonna Use Those Multis On You,
Oh Shit Too Late He Dropped His Tight Verse & Again You Feel Like Do Do,
Asking Guta For Advice Is A Nice Try,
But Why Ask A Opponent You Know You Got Fried From,
You Bet Each others Mum's Who Ever Wins Gets To Fuck Them Again,
So Next Battle This Robot Goes First He Drops His Verse But Doesn't Curse,
He Thinks If He Tries To Act Nice His Opponent Will Go Easy,
So He Is Thinking From His Dome You See ?,
So Now His Opponent Finally Drops & What A Blow Out That Was,
I Guess Battling Isn't My Kinda Style,
So While I Walk Away From One Terrible Loss,
I Shake Hands With My Opponent & Tell Him Nice "Loss"...


Ps...In The End I Won. :8) .. Kinda Get It ?
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby classthe_king » Jul 12th, '10, 19:17

You do know that rap's are suppossed to rhyme, right?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Just Silver » Jul 12th, '10, 19:18

Spent to much time capitalizing each word instead of thinking what to write
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Robot » Jul 12th, '10, 19:20

classthe_king wrote:You do know that rap's are suppossed to rhyme, right?


I do that, it's just hard for me to do that,
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Robot » Jul 12th, '10, 19:20

Just Silver wrote:Spent to much time capitalizing each word instead of thinking what to write



You don't say ?
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby classthe_king » Jul 12th, '10, 19:20

Robot wrote:
classthe_king wrote:You do know that rap's are suppossed to rhyme, right?


I do that, it's just hard for me to do that,


How is it hard for you to rhyme? That's the fundamental part of rap music
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Just Silver » Jul 12th, '10, 19:28

Robot wrote:
Just Silver wrote:Spent to much time capitalizing each word instead of thinking what to write



You don't say ?

I was just fuckin around dont take it personal :p
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Robot » Jul 12th, '10, 19:59

Just Silver wrote:
Robot wrote:
Just Silver wrote:Spent to much time capitalizing each word instead of thinking what to write



You don't say ?

I was just fuckin around dont take it personal :p


I know man :D
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Robot » Jul 12th, '10, 19:59

classthe_king wrote:
Robot wrote:
classthe_king wrote:You do know that rap's are suppossed to rhyme, right?


I do that, it's just hard for me to do that,


How is it hard for you to rhyme? That's the fundamental part of rap music


Yeah fun for you guys lol, you guys are good and know what to do, you sit and look at my rhymes and like what the fuck lmao!
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Solace » Jul 12th, '10, 23:41

Fundamental doesn't mean fun. :facepalm
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby classthe_king » Jul 12th, '10, 23:43

Solace wrote:Fundamental doesn't mean fun. :facepalm


I didn't even catch that :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby gutawafang » Jul 13th, '10, 02:30

hahahaha. man, i online on MSN
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Robot » Jul 13th, '10, 04:48

gutawafang wrote:hahahaha. man, i online on MSN



*Signs on*
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby gutawafang » Jul 13th, '10, 04:54

Robot wrote:
gutawafang wrote:hahahaha. man, i online on MSN



*Signs on*

I dont see u online eh :unsure:
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Re: A Diss To Me

Postby Robot » Jul 13th, '10, 05:37

gutawafang wrote:
Robot wrote:
gutawafang wrote:hahahaha. man, i online on MSN



*Signs on*

I dont see u online eh :unsure:


I don't see you online either, (are you even online? lol)
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