I'm a verbal onslaught,bout to murder cock boys
You never heard of hot songs,you're a loser,thought so
I'll even burn your torso,ok,that's very irrelevant
I'll also burn your parents and,turn you to my pedestal
That means you'll be licking my feet,dudes just quickly hide,please
I don't talk about sex but I'll drop you from "69" feet
I'm bout to make some motherfuckin noise happen
You're on more dicks then sitting on a Royce album
If you don't get that line you should go and bury yourself
I'm not "robbin' hoods" but I'm accused of many more thefts
then a fuckin' gangster collectin' money for a chevy corvette
Sicker than a hot young bitch lookin' at naked old men
Don't you get it? There's no competing 'gainst me
Cuz my whole career is made of straight beating MCs
You'll be happy if you get out of it with scratches
Cuz I'm fixin' hip hop more than MicroSoft fixes Windows with patches
Onslaught 2 FreeVerse
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Onslaught 2 FreeVerse
by ThomasJ » Jul 12th, '10, 13:33
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: Onslaught 2 FreeVerse
by BILI » Jul 12th, '10, 14:03
Its cool man,but I liked the other drop more,I feel like this was rhyming for the sake of it,still some nice lines,plus I can flow this piece well too.
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Re: Onslaught 2 FreeVerse
by gutawafang » Jul 13th, '10, 02:12
Nice flow and nameplay and wordplay man. Good read. 
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Re: Onslaught 2 FreeVerse
by ThomasJ » Jul 13th, '10, 08:23
Thanks Bili and Guta 
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: Onslaught 2 FreeVerse
by Yah-hah » Jul 13th, '10, 09:26
It flowed pretty good I dug the wordplay the last line seemed a bit crammed in ya know but I do that shit all the time so it's all good. Nice shit though
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol
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Re: Onslaught 2 FreeVerse
by ThomasJ » Jul 13th, '10, 09:51
Thank you very much man 
...The mortician of love, sent from above
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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