Blood Thirst.

[TheHundred$]

I'm the opposite of a philanthropist, phones ringing will you answer this?
Taking away from you things that will not be missed. Class dismissed.
Like the bell rang, slaying demons like Van Helsing, straight blasphemous.
Might need a gas mask for this, making ya stand back and gasp "Oh Shit"
I'm here, the end is near, i'm praying on your fears, let me make shit clear.
take the veneers and slice you ear to ear, blood loss severe, who's next can I have a volunteer?
To get behind the wheel and steer, after a thirty pack of beer and try to shift the gear
into first, i've gotten a blood thirst and since you arrived it's gotten much worse,
I've been cursed, to put you in a hurst, cock load it then shot's disperse.
Speakin backwords so to understand me you gotta play it reversed
I rehearsed with the devil to get to this level when i wrote this verse.

Short.

any feedback?

I wrote it to this beat, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kcqPq518 ... re=related

I like to do that.. it gives me inspiration.

[Yah-hah]

I love that first line lol it just works haha dude I dig your pieces you have a pretty good grasp for multiesI see alot better vocab wise than the last piece too I like pieces like this too kinda random violence stuff too so props man

[TheHundred$]

I love that first line lol it just works haha dude I dig your pieces you have a pretty good grasp for multiesI see alot better vocab wise than the last piece too I like pieces like this too kinda random violence stuff too so props man

Thanks man I really appreciate the feedback. It's funny because I wrote this up fast as I thought it like a freestyle and it's not often that I actually sit down and think everything out and take time on it, maybe I should try it sometime

[Yah-hah]

Yeah man I do the same stuff I usually just key up somethin and get on a rol pretty soon I have a whole song lol

[gutawafang]

Flow, multis. It's fucking dope man.

[TheHundred$]

Flow, multis. It's fucking dope man.

Thanks man! I really appreciate it!