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SMOKE CRACK!

Postby J Roc » Jul 14th, '10, 11:40

Im already feeling stupid enough, so I Smoke until i Feel Like it'll be June In a Month
You Mad?-Stop! Cause when u "Crack-Roc" Trust Me u was DOING THE DRUG!
i'd Pass Meth but i smoke crack until Halfs Left iiiight, and It's already Passed BedTime
So say Sonny's-Funny Looking Like Humpty-Dumpty Cause i'm a 'Crack Head', Right??
My drug life..Yall Talking Some Smack?? Visit ur momma u should be Watching Her 'Back'
Cuzzz Just Remember friday the 13th whenever u wanna 'Walk Over Crack'
Ayo for Yayo ... I touch coke and even my Joints 'Crack'
And i always talk about drugs cuz even my Voice 'Cracks'
When i see Crack Babies i give props to the Mom & The Dad (Pffft)
For Letting Them Start Early ...i think thats the Problem i had
But Now Let's Seee Yah Hah's Girl Go On & Talk About Crack ... lmao

NVM ! ..... it didn't go down like i wanted it to so there will be no Features on this piece and im not changing the last line. Lightwork.
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Re: SMOKE CRACK!

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jul 14th, '10, 12:14

pretty nice work bro
my favorite part is

J roc wrote:You Mad?-Stop! Cause when u "Crack-Roc" Trust Me u was DOING THE DRUG!


:sweating: sick as hell

also :laughing: @ the random ass avatar of Lugi
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Re: SMOKE CRACK!

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 14th, '10, 23:17

J roc wrote:
When i see Crack Babies i give props to the Mom & The Dad (Pffft)
For Letting Them Start Early ...i think thats the Problem i had
.


Was the dopest line lol made me laugh Haha she told me you were tryin to get her to collab. She was all 'IDK wat I'm doing!!' lmao she said thanks for the shouty though lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: SMOKE CRACK!

Postby J Roc » Jul 15th, '10, 19:13

Yah-hah wrote:
J roc wrote:
When i see Crack Babies i give props to the Mom & The Dad (Pffft)
For Letting Them Start Early ...i think thats the Problem i had
.


Was the dopest line lol made me laugh Haha she told me you were tryin to get her to collab. She was all 'IDK wat I'm doing!!' lmao she said thanks for the shouty though lol


No problem telll her she let me down :whistle: hahaha .

Thanks for peeeping & feeeding yalll my eyes are still pink from last night pffft
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Re: SMOKE CRACK!

Postby Solace » Jul 20th, '10, 22:16

That was pretty damn dope B :y:
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