Untitled(Unfinished)

[neversnooze]

this piece i was writing was for slim zaddy. me and slim zaddy were working on a track for him to rap on. i was writing this piece so he could grab ideas/ or use a line or two. it was an emotional track for his girl. ofcourse, he never showed up online and i never bothered finishing the song. here is what i have written so far and how i can officially call it "quits". the name "zaid" is slim zaddy and "ranad" is his girls name.



Chorus
Ranad being together with you it makes me glad
Our love sky rockets through a launching pad
Holding our heart will steer our space shuttle
Zaid is romantic like a warm bath with bubbles
The flashes from the stars is like our candle
We circle the orbit from the fuel of a cupid
When comet hit’s earth our love has been greeted

Lyrics
I love you Ranad you remind me of a sweet scented fragrance
My nostrils can smell beauty from your head to your necklace
My lips are moist after it has rained and stopped its drought
A kiss from me will burn a flaming desire that will never burn out
I wonder

[Robot]

Really good, can't wait to read the rest.

[neversnooze]

ty robot and sorry to disappoint you, but it will not be finished. Slim zaddy scrapped it and wrote something completely different.

[Robot]

^ It's okay, it was really good though enjoyed it