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Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 14th, '10, 23:15

[Yah-Hah]
This is a big Fuck you to all the experts
I let loose these fresh words to produce the best verse,
Abuse ya neck worse till I undo the next herse,
Let loose the next curse speak voodoo spells at the best part,
Get smart I'll to send you to hell when the tech sparks,
If you look for the bodies then you can go swim where the rest are,
The right hand'll hit you dead hard leavin your face with stretch marks,
I'ma cut both your arms off and put you in a cobra clutch,
Grab Arabian shady's bomb vest and fuckin blow us both up
Because I know actions speak louder than words,
But you wont be speakin when I put your mouth on this curb
Run over both your legs and challenge you 10 mile summer race,
With an anthrax napkin I'ma wipe that joker smile off your face,
Chainsaw to ya leg with a wooden peg come on fucker stand straight,
Punch my own mouth so I can spit red saliva right in the klans face,
Inject anistesia so I dont feel it when I punch you in your damn face.....till my hand breaks

eenie, meenie, minee, moe
got my, beanie, cut, eyeholes
who will go I just don't know
thats how, random, violence, go

eenie, meenie, minee, moe.
Got the, lighter, spark the, dro
if he, hollers, fire two , mo(more)
thats how, random, violence, go

[Dr. Dope]
Yo, I'm riding with Yah, in the back of the benz with two gatts and a saw
Ready to dismantle your jaw with a baseball bat leave onlookers in awe
mothafucka i'm raw,the two craziest mothafuckas disobeying the law
Our M.O. is our ammo, fuck silence i'll eat the whole lamb whole
start with wool, wear veal like a veil, then wear his damn skull,
phsychos? Yo we got a whole clan full, need an ass-whoopin?
man we got a whole can full, need drugs? here I got a handful of X and dro
Toucan Sam flow, got these fruits running in loops but your too damn slow,
take the battle knife out my combat boot,end your life, pure force i'm a brute
have blood spillin from your head like passion fruit, then take your loot
if you wanna kill the tree gotta pull out the root, watch out i'm in route
if you wanna fuck with me better learn how to shoot, hope your aims acute
i'll end this dispute, ah fuck i got blood on my suit, now i'm in full pursuit
I strap my AK I think i'll take it out to play today, got a full clip plus razor blades
walk down the parkway and just spray for days, jesus I hope you prayed today
you better just pray my crazed gaze strays away, its just a game I play i just go...

eenie, meenie, minee, moe
got my, beanie, cut, eyeholes
who will go I just don't know
thats how, random, violence, go

eenie, meenie, minne, moe.
Got the, lighter, spark the, dro
if he, hollers, fire two , mo(more)
thats how, random, violence, go
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Robot » Jul 15th, '10, 01:01

That's what I'm talking about, props to both you to, you guys did good :worship:
I never asked, cared, gave a fuck, or wanted opinions.
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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 15th, '10, 01:21

Thanks alot bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby BILI » Jul 15th, '10, 02:24

That was dope guys,I like Yah˙s verse more tho.Who did that hook :worship:
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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 15th, '10, 03:59

Thanks BILI yeah Dr. Dope is the one got the chorus I really dig it.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Emadyville » Jul 15th, '10, 04:42

Yah you killed it, that was dope. Dr. dope you killed it too, hooks pretty cool, great piece :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby 77o77 » Jul 15th, '10, 06:57

I was bumpin the flow on dr dope's part, I was really feelin the beginning.

As for Yah, damn bro those were some straight outta the book insane verse.
It was great and I love how your multis spit themself.
The chorus was dope but I was feelin the dro more than the gore in eyeballs . But as far as that subject, ya'll killed it.
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 15th, '10, 07:13

77o77 wrote:I was bumpin the flow on dr dope's part, I was really feelin the beginning.

As for Yah, damn bro those were some straight outta the book insane verse.
It was great and I love how your multis spit themself.
The chorus was dope but I was feelin the dro more than the gore in eyeballs . But as far as that subject, ya'll killed it.


Lol thanks for the feed everyone

by the way I was referring to cutting eyeholes into the beanie so it would be like a ski mask... not cutting out peoples eye holes.
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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby 77o77 » Jul 15th, '10, 07:26

Lol I Mis read it. ;)


…I still like dro.
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Arabian Shady » Jul 15th, '10, 19:10

hahaha that was INSANEEEE
for reala, Yah's verse had a flow much easier to read, apart from that i think both writers brought it .
This shit went hard brotha's, good shyte :b:
daym, makes me wana write somethin now..


Yah-hah wrote:I'ma cut both your arms off and put you in a cobra clutch,
Grab Arabian shady's bomb vest and fuckin blow us both up


:shifty:

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appreciate the shouty homie!!!
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 15th, '10, 22:05

Thanks everyone lol Arab you know I got ya back. Thanks for all the love yall Dr.Dope is...dope haha
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 15th, '10, 22:13

I can do better, thanks though guys..

We will have to do another one soon Yah, and I will really bring my A game.

Yeah?
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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby BILI » Jul 15th, '10, 22:15

Dr. Dope wrote:I can do better, thanks though guys..

We will have to do another one soon Yah, and I will really bring my A game.

Yeah?

I would love to see a new piece :y:
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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 15th, '10, 22:15

I'm always down.......pause
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Random Violence ft Dr. Dope

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 15th, '10, 22:16

BILI wrote:
Dr. Dope wrote:I can do better, thanks though guys..

We will have to do another one soon Yah, and I will really bring my A game.

Yeah?

I would love to see a new piece :y:


I'll do it just for you :flutter:

If Yah is down.

Edit: Looks like he is lol.
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