Intensify to Glorify

[gutawafang]

Flash wounds, that means they quick to be felt so now you feel me?
Your words they like bullets, were they intended to kill me?
Your actions I mean, it hurts really, I need a permanent bandage
To hide the shame I’ve accumulated, to reduce the fucking damage
But protection’s not secure, I think I need a shirt that’s bulletproof
And some candy floss maybe so I won’t hear the truest truth
Coming out of your mouth, I hate you for hurting me in mere seconds
If this threat isn’t enough to make you shudder, then it is fear lacking
So I instill it by telling you why I’m doing this with no remorse
I don’t just leave my feelings obscure with vocab and metaphors
So before you cause further raindrops of needles on my chocolate skin
And turn it into a different color tone, I’m gonna make it end
Fuck red, the only thing that’s bleeding is when you’re having menses
To say that you just stabbed me in the heart, it’s fucking senseless
I mean, it hurts deeply but if it’s just for one moment, it’s okay I guess
Thank you and fuck you for making me realize that everyday I’m blessed

With a curse to express all the pain stuck in my chest
That’s why we’re now intensified with fucking pain that we deny
Love and hate they both compete, they all the same cuz they complete
That’s why we’re now intensified with fucking pain we glorify

And magnify with photoshop, that’s not the point that I am stressing
But you notice how I say it, it’s like I could count my blessings
With my fingers and my toes, I don’t care, it’s not enough
I’m contradicting all the time, and right now I am in love
With you, with words copied and pasted from MS word document
No more debates, no more confusions, no more fucking arguments
No more messages, no more calls, no more twitters, no more blogs
I know I’ll soon be killed by your Mafia or Reservoir Dogs
It’s like a bomb strapped to my ass now, if I sit, I’ll ignite it
So fuck it as you can see, I’m standing up, I’m gonna fight this
With all my strength, yes every joule, physically fuck all the rules
I’ma fly high to pluck the moon cuz it suits your beautiful
Face, you’re the finishing line, you’re my aim if it’s a race
When I reach you, it’s when you save me, I’m the damsel in distress
I mean, it hurts but I endure it, I withstand these obstacles
But as you can see the way I see it, I think it’s optional

To love you and express it in raps out of my chest
That’s why we’re now intensified with fucking pain that we deny
When I try to make it work, you bitches call me a jerk
That’s why we’re now intensified with fucking pain we glorify

[Lupidshwoopshh]

Nice!

[77o77]

I'm feelin it but you can do better still It's nice tho

[gutawafang]

Thanks guys

[Boston]

im feeling this to some extent, i feel like some of the slant rhymes you use dont quite fit, but then some shit i liked was right at the begining like

"Your words they like bullets, were they intended to kill me?"

haha that was pretty ill. good shit tho. keep it up

[gutawafang]

im feeling this to some extent, i feel like some of the slant rhymes you use dont quite fit, but then some shit i liked was right at the begining like

"Your words they like bullets, were they intended to kill me?"

haha that was pretty ill. good shit tho. keep it up

Thank you very much Boston.

[gutawafang]

I like this. The hook sounds really cool in my head too.

Yep. You got it. Hook here is the shizer. Thanks for reading man!