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Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 22:59

Yeah i know its short its just summin quick
This is a quick 10 line diss to robot
this would have probably been better as a battle but what ever..

Findin it funny how you diss yourself robot
actin best suckin dick bitch, be re-named blow-bot
Mr 20 Year Old Janitor, shows you get owned'in rhymes
try and become lyrically better, get ya self known'in time
bein called the worst writer ever, seen by Mr Classic
people have told you how to rhyme, so why be drastic
"step by step" tutorials, wouldn't even get you better
just get a ghost writer, he gets "easy" money in a letter
but whatever, just build up random sins in battle
just take away this "babys" fun, and bin his rattle

Leave some feedback, thanks :flower: :y:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 18th, '10, 23:01

Why you dissing Robot?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:02

I find him annoyin
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 18th, '10, 23:03

He's my protege
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:04

oh cool, so are you gonna diss me because i dissed him now ?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 18th, '10, 23:06

No cause disses are stupid and personally I think they should be kept in the RB section
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 23:06

Fa-Q wrote:He's my protege


You should let your prodigy battle my protege. I hear they're on the same skill level.
Last edited by classthe_king on Jul 18th, '10, 23:14, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:07

classthe_king wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:He's my protege


You should let your prodigy battle my prodigy. I hear they're on the same skill level.


lol anyway, can someone leave some feed ?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:13

SiiNiDE wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:He's my protege


You should let your prodigy battle my prodigy. I hear they're on the same skill level.

He said protege, not prodigy. You fucking idiot. A prodigy is defined as a person with exceptional talents or powers. Obviously none of you qualify for that title. A protege, on the other hand, however lame it may be to be a whack netcee's protege, is a person who is trained and/or influenced by another.

On topic: Wow, you murdered him. I am not sure if he can come back from such an amazing diss. Your punchlines hit hard. I mean, fire hard. They were sizzling.


Ha thanks man, at least someone got on topic :y:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 23:13

SiiNiDE wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:He's my protege


You should let your prodigy battle my prodigy. I hear they're on the same skill level.

He said protege, not prodigy. You fucking idiot. A prodigy is defined as a person with exceptional talents or powers. Obviously none of you qualify for that title. A protege, on the other hand, however lame it may be to be a whack netcee's protege, is a person who is trained and/or influenced by another.

On topic: Wow, you murdered him. I am not sure if he can come back from such an amazing diss. Your punchlines hit hard. I mean, fire hard. They were sizzling.


Damnit, I know the difference :tounge2: I wasn't paying much attention to what I was doing.
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 18th, '10, 23:14

classthe_king wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:He's my protege


You should let your prodigy battle my prodigy. I hear they're on the same skill level.

Link's broken?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:15

Yeah... Anyway can someone else leave feed?
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 23:16

Element. wrote:Yeah... Anyway can someone else leave feed?


The dude that said the punchlines hit hard and were fire was being sarcastic. Everything you said was very boring. You need to use some wordplay in a diss.
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 18th, '10, 23:17

simple rhyming simple diss...theres your feed
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 18th, '10, 23:17

classthe_king wrote:
Element. wrote:Yeah... Anyway can someone else leave feed?


The dude that said the punchlines hit hard and were fire was being sarcastic. Everything you said was very boring. You need to use some wordplay in a diss.



Ok thanks for the feed :y:
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